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Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which one do you prefer? v.3

Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which one do you prefer? v. 3
Learning is an ongoing activity which starts from our birth and continues till death. Some people argue that learning by own experiences is more efficient and long lasting. However, others state that teachers are the best mentor and their knowledge, experiences, observations and techniques will enable us to learn quickly and effectively. I strongly believe that teachers are the best source of knowledge and their role and efforts are always applaudable and acknowledgeable. There is no doubt that teachers are the trained professionals, who are equipped with latest and modern teaching techniques. They know the art of being delivering difficult concepts in friendly and relaxing ways. As all the students do not have equal intelligence level. Here, teachers play a vital role as they understand the capacity of each student. Teachers have sheer knowledge because of their vast experience and observations. They can also provide real-time knowledge of the things to their students. Furthermore, teachers can provide quick solutions to various problems of students. By this, I mean that student would have effective learning in minimal time span. However, learning by doing is an approach, which has long lasting and undeniable benefits. In facts, this is a time-consuming process as you have to do research and implement by your own but its advantages cannot be ignored. In conclusion, I would like to say that teachers' role is mandatory in learning. There is no alternative to their knowledge and experiences. Under their guidance and supervision, one can learn and perform exceptionally well.
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is an ongoing activity which
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starts
from our birth and continues till death.
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people
argue that
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learning
by
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own
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experiences
is more efficient and
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long lasting
.
However
, others state that
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teachers
are the best mentor and their
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knowledge
,
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experiences
, observations and techniques will enable us to learn
quickly
and
effectively
. I
strongly
believe that
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teachers
are the best source of
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knowledge
and their role and efforts are always
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applaudable
and
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acknowledgeable
.

There is no doubt that
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teachers
are the trained professionals, who
are equipped
with latest and modern teaching techniques. They know the art of being delivering difficult concepts in friendly and relaxing ways.
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As
all the
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students
do not have equal intelligence level. Here,
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teachers
play a vital role as they understand the capacity of each student.

Teachers have sheer
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knowledge
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because
of their vast
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experience
and observations. They can
also
provide real-time
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knowledge
of the things to their
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students
.
Furthermore
,
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teachers
can provide quick solutions to various problems of
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students
. By this, I mean that
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student
would have effective
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learning
in minimal time span.

However
,
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learning
by doing is an approach, which has
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
long lasting
and undeniable benefits. In facts, this is a time-consuming process as you
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have to
do research and implement by your
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own
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but
its advantages cannot be
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ignored
.

In conclusion
, I would like to say that teachers' role is mandatory in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
learning
. There is no alternative to their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
experiences
. Under their guidance and supervision, one can learn and perform
exceptionally
well.
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IELTS essay Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which one do you prefer? v. 3

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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