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Some people think that there are things individual can do help to prevent global climate change. Others believe that the action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments or large businesses which can make a difference.

Some people think that there are things individual can do help to prevent global climate change. Others believe that the action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments or large businesses which can make a difference. pOew
There are two different ideas which are related to assist prevent international climate change, many people claim that each person can do something which helps to foreclose climate change, however, othera emphasize that doing doing something by individuals is unbeneficial and irrelevant and the action always connects to government or large business who make a difference. I am going to discuss both sides with specific reasons and examples based on my personal experience with giving my opinion. First of all, it is considered that the given view includes many reasons, one of the is that only person can help to prevent global climate change. For instance, if someone do not subvert litters to streets or environment, she or he may foreclose climate change. The second reason is that when one people units with other one, they will be good ordinary team, nevertheless, although they are ordinary, they can do big things. From my point of view the ways of preventing international climate change is that government can do help to our nature because if the give order to clean one area, people will have to do it or some rules should be given by government. Another reason is that instead of only person or some ways, if the owner of large business organize new team which assists to foreclose climate change, this may increase and we will achieve our goal. In conclusion, after having pertinent point of view, I can partical agree both sides because the ideas are very helpful and successful for our nature.
There are two
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ideas
which
are related
to assist
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prevent
international
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climate
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change
,
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many
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people
claim that each person can do something which
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helps
to foreclose
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climate
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change
,
however
,
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othera
emphasize that
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doing doing
something by individuals is
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unbeneficial
and irrelevant and the action always connects to
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government
or large business who
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make
a difference. I am going to discuss both sides with specific
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reasons
and examples based on my personal experience with giving my opinion.

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, it
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that the
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given
view includes
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many
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reasons
, one of the is that
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only
person can
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help
to
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prevent
global
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climate
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change
.
For instance
, if someone
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do
not subvert litters to streets or environment, she or he may foreclose
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climate
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change
. The second
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reason
is that when one
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people
units with other one, they will be
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good
ordinary team,
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, although they are ordinary, they can do
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big
things.

From my point of view the ways of preventing international
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climate
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change
is that
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government
can do
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help
to our nature
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because
if the give order to clean one area,
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people
will
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have to
do it or
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some
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rules
should be
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given
by
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government
. Another
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reason
is that
instead
of
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only
person or
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some
ways, if the owner of large business organize new team which assists to foreclose
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climate
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change
, this may
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increase and
we will achieve our goal.

In conclusion
, after having pertinent point of view, I can
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partical
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both sides
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are
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helpful and successful for our nature.
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IELTS essay Some people think that there are things individual can do help to prevent global climate change. Others believe that the action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments or large businesses which can make a difference.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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