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Some people think that the only way to judge someone's success in business is by the amount of money they make. is this a true indicator of the success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured?

Most of the people argued that, earning from business is the real parameter for measuring success in the business and other people argued that, it is not only indicator for judging business achievement. This essay will analyse the both views. To earn profit people start their business. Basically, it is considered the main goal. This goal plays a crucial role to the further steps. Todays world, we measure the sucess on the basis of the earning of the business organisation. For instance, the owner of the TESLA company Alon Musk was the richest man in the world. Last week, but the owner of the Amazon company become the richest person now. This measures done by the basis of their income. By earning profits they gained huge reputation. Money has its own significance in this regards. while, money plays a crucial role for recognising the success of the business. , brand value and positive repuation also needed. Todays competitive and busy world people are earning money by any means. Lot of people take loan for bank and never back the money to the bank. They declared themselves as bankcrupts. Later, those types of business owner becomes one the richest person in that perticular country. For example, In Bangladesh 2007, owner of BEXIMCO company declared himself as bankcrupts, 12 years later he becomes one of the richest person in Bangladesh. This type of business can not be considered as successful business. Additionally, positive response from customers as well as creating reputation also necessary. This types of business grow with the positive feed back from customers. For example, XIOAMI company started their business with very less marketing strategies. They had faith on their products. Now they are successful by getting good responses from people. To sum up, money bran value, and positive reputation needed to be considered as successful business. Good business person earn profit as well as reputation also.
Most of the
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people
argued that,
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earning
from
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business
is the real parameter for measuring success in the
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business
and other
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people
argued that, it is not
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only
indicator for judging
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business
achievement. This essay will
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analyse
the both views. To earn profit
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people
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start
their
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business
.
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, it
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the main goal. This goal plays a crucial role to the
further
steps.
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Todays
world, we measure the
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sucess
on the basis of the
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earning
of the
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business
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organisation
.
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, the
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owner
of the TESLA
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company
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Alon
Musk was the
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richest
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man
in the world. Last week,
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but
the
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owner
of the Amazon
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company
become the
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richest
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person
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now
.
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measures done by the basis of their income. By
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earning
profits they gained huge
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reputation
.
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Money
has its
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own
significance
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in this regards
.

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while
,
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money
plays a crucial role for
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recognising
the success of the
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business
.
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,
brand value and
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positive
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repuation
also
needed.
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Todays
competitive and busy world
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people
are
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earning
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money
by any means. Lot of
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people
take loan for bank and never back the
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money
to the bank. They declared themselves as
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bankcrupts
. Later, those types of
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business
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owner
becomes one the
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richest
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person
in that
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perticular
country.
For example
, In Bangladesh 2007,
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owner
of
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BEXIMCO
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company
declared himself as
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bankcrupts
, 12 years later he becomes one of the
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richest
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person
in Bangladesh. This type of
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business
can not
be considered
as successful business.

Additionally
,
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positive
response from customers
as well
as creating
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reputation
also
necessary. This types of
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business
grow with the
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positive
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feed back
from customers.
For example
,
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XIOAMI
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company
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started
their
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business
with
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very
less marketing strategies. They had faith on their products.
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Now
they are successful by getting
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good
responses from
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people
.

To sum up,
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money
bran value, and
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positive
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reputation
needed to
be considered
as successful
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business
.
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Good
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business
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person
earn profit
as well
as
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reputation
also
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the only way to judge someone's success in business is by the amount of money they make. is this a true indicator of the success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
317 words
6.0
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