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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays reading a book is an essential factor for child education. In this generation, every individuals prefer to read online rather than any paper material. Therafter, before reaching to any suitable conclusion the positives and negatives of the given notion will be discussed further in the following paragraphs. Glancing on one side, in this trend online reading is more useful than physical reading. Firstly, e-books are very eco-friendly. Also, it saves the environment and many trees by stopping them to cut down. Secondly, people can carry online books easily with them at any location, as it stores several information together in one device. Thus, it can be easily available to use everywhere. To examplify, in this technical era, students prefer to read online books because it is easily available in many gadgets than the market and receive various information together at home. Lastly, reading an e-books are more cheaper than the paper books, which are available in market. However, as it has low cost people wants to choose online reading. Catching a glimpse of the other side, reading an e-book gives a negligent impact on human's life. Primarily, reading an online books are dangerous for human's eyes. Also, it affects the concentration while they read online. Moreover, if there is a lack of internet then online reading is not possible. To recapitulate, after analysing pros and cones of the given notion, I believe that reading a paper book gives a toxic impact on every human-being. Hence, e-books are more advantageous.
Nowadays
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reading
a
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book
is an essential factor for child education. In this generation, every
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individuals
prefer to read
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online
rather
than any paper material.
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Therafter
,
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before
reaching to any suitable conclusion the positives and negatives of the
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given
notion will
be discussed
further
in the following paragraphs.

Glancing on one side, in this trend
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online
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reading
is more useful than physical
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reading
.
Firstly
, e-books are
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very
eco-friendly.
Also
, it saves the environment and
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many
trees by stopping them to
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cut
down.
Secondly
,
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people
can carry
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online
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books
easily
with them at any location, as it stores
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several information
together in one device.
Thus
, it can be
easily
available to
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use
everywhere. To
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examplify
, in this technical era, students prefer to read
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online
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books
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because
it is
easily
available in
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many
gadgets than the market and receive various information together at home.
Lastly
,
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reading
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an e-books
are
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more cheaper
than the paper
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books
, which are available in market.
However
, as it has low cost
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people
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wants
to choose
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online
reading.

Catching a glimpse of the other side,
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reading
an e-book gives a negligent impact on human's life.
Primarily
,
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reading
an
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online
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books
are
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dangerous
for
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human's eyes
.
Also
, it affects the concentration while they read
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online
.
Moreover
, if there is a lack of internet then
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online
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reading
is not possible.

To recapitulate, after
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analysing
pros and cones of the
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given
notion, I believe that
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reading
a paper
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book
gives a toxic impact on every human-being.
Hence
, e-books are more advantageous.
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IELTS essay In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
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