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There is considerable amount of people who believes that in future no one will ever buy a printed newspaper as they would be able to read it for free, online. Personally, I am also a firm believer of this forecast.

There is considerable amount of people who believes that in future no one will ever buy a printed newspaper as they would be able to read it for free, online. Personally, I am also a firm believer of this forecast. YdwBV
With the advancement of technology, everything change rapidly. In our fast paced where majority of the people are addicted to their phone screens, the assumption that no one will ever buy a newspaper or book, holds a merit. The flow of information has become tremendously fast as compared to with the past few decades for so. People nowadays already get majority of their news online and they are not limited to just few news outlets. Every major platform along with new internet based news organizations, are all providing news to people for free.
With the advancement of technology, everything
change
rapidly
. In our
fast
paced where majority of the
people
are addicted
to their phone screens, the assumption that no one will ever
buy
a newspaper or book, holds a merit. The flow of information has become
tremendously
fast
as compared to with the past few decades for
so
.
People
nowadays already
get
majority of
their
news
online and
they are not limited to
just
few
news
outlets. Every major platform along with
new
internet based
news
organizations, are all providing
news
to
people
for free.
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IELTS essay There is considerable amount of people who believes that in future no one will ever buy a printed newspaper as they would be able to read it for free, online. Personally, I am also a firm believer of this forecast.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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