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Some people think that the new house should be built in the same style as older houses other believe that the local council should Allow people to choose different designs for the houses discuss both the views and give your opinion

Some people think that the new house should be built in the same style as older houses other believe that the local council should Allow people to choose different designs for the houses discuss both the views and give your opinion 5L1pP
It is widely considered by many people that the infrastructure of new accommodations should be the copy of old ones. However, Some people believe that every person should have permission to design their houses according to their own choices. This essay will discuss both sides of the arguments. To begin with, There are myriad reasons behind the fact that why every home should have same style. Firstly, The feeling of unity spread among the community if they have same designed homes. Moreover, the jealousy factor decrease among people because every person have same material on their houses. secondly, some people like to preserve the traditional architecture of community. For instance, There is Korea tradition village in Jenoju korea. In this village all residence have been constructed in traditional style. Probing further, there are many reasons why people should have permission to to design their house on their own wishes. First and foremost, it is the basic right of human beings to construct their residential area according to their convenience. If the government does not allow then people become isolated from society and it will decrease the economy of the country. For instance, many people these days construct their house outside the city to make it more lavish and according to their comfort. To conclude, I would like to reiterate from the above discussion that behind same layout of houses is because of traditional values and and to reduce jealousy factor. Whereas people should also have rights to to make their house with the use of new technology and it is their legal right.
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that the infrastructure of new accommodations should be the copy of
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ones.
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believe that every person should have permission to design their
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houses
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choices. This essay will discuss both sides of the arguments.

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with, There are myriad reasons behind the fact that why every home should have same
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, The feeling of unity spread among the community if they have same designed homes.
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, the jealousy factor decrease among
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people
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every person have same material on their
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.
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secondly
,
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some
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like to preserve the traditional architecture of community.
For instance
, There is Korea tradition village in
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Jenoju
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korea
. In this village all residence have
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in traditional style.

Probing
further
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reasons why
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people
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design their
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house
on their
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wishes.
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government
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then
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become isolated from society and it will decrease the economy of the country.
For instance
,
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people
these days construct their
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outside the city to
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make
it more lavish and according to their comfort.

To conclude
, I would like to reiterate from the above discussion that behind same layout of
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is
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because
of traditional values
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to
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reduce
jealousy factor. Whereas
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of new technology and it is their legal right.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the new house should be built in the same style as older houses other believe that the local council should Allow people to choose different designs for the houses discuss both the views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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