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A letter to your new friends in your international school

A letter to your new friends in your international school RVAOW
Hello everyone whom I never met before. My name is Minh Anh, and my full name is Nguyen Minh Anh. Along time ago I just a normal student come from Viet Nam which have many beautiful scenery and wonderful food with friendly people. But now everything can change due to the fact I am going to become a international student, and I can meet new friends as you is my hapiness. I know Switzerland is a wonderful country which has conditional living high and extremaly modern. I will come and may be live and work in Zurich - one of the most happy cities in the world. I feel extremaly excited about meeting and working with you in this city. Because of international student, and my germany is not also good, I feel a little of scary, a little of embarrassing. I really want you could help me if I come to Zurrich. I may be come to it from Friday to Monday because I have some problem about my passport. Can I call you when I come to Switzerland? I do not know how to go to my hotel and I do not have much knowledge regarding German. I will really expected your reply.
Hello everyone whom I never met
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. My name is
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Minh
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Anh
, and my full name is Nguyen
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Minh
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.
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ago I
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a normal student
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come
from
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Nam which have
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many
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beautiful
scenery and wonderful food with friendly
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people
.
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But
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now
everything can
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due to the fact I am going to become
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a
international student, and I can
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meet
new friends as you is my
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hapiness
. I know Switzerland is a wonderful country which has conditional living high and
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extremaly
modern. I will
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come
and may be
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live
and work in Zurich
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one of the most happy cities in the world.
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I
feel
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extremaly
excited about meeting and working with you in this city.
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of international student, and my
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germany
is not
also
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good
, I feel a
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little
of scary, a
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little
of embarrassing. I
really
want you could
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help
me if I
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come
to
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Zurrich
. I may be
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come
to it from Friday to Monday
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because
I have
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some
problem about my passport. Can I call you when I
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come
to Switzerland? I do not know how to go to my hotel and I do not have much knowledge regarding German.

I will
really
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expected
your reply.
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IELTS essay A letter to your new friends in your international school

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
205 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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