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Some people think that the meat shuld not eat but the vegetarian food good for healthy diet

Some people think that the meat shuld not eat but the vegetarian food good for healthy diet Bgogj
It is generally reckoned that the meat is not necessary for a healthy diet; it is the obligation of every individual to prefer the vegetarian food; likewise, I concur to this notion as other products such as milk also provide all the nutrients of meat; the non vegetarian food decreases the population of animals. The prime catalyst behind my agreement to this statement is other products fulfill the nutrients of meat, owing in the contemporary era, there are multifarious dishes that are feasible in the market such as milk, egg; these things are fulfill the amount of vitamin D, proteins. Probing ahead, the individuals eat meat either to increase the power of their brain, or the meat is recommended by the doctors during any maladies. But, nowadays doctors also understand the value of other products; they suggest egg to their patients instead of meat. A good example of this is the American government has put a ban on the consumption of meat as 50% of American citizens become obese due to the over consumption of meat, according to the 'Meat Consumption Report'. Hence, it is clearly evident that the preference must be given to the vegetarian food. Further, reinforcing my idea the consumption of non vegetarian food influence the population of animals for the reason the enormous rise has been witnessed in the populous of homo sapiens; the demand of food is also increasing day by day; that is why the Chinese authorities compel the citizens of China to eat meat that cause 50% reduction on the population of dogs, fishes etc. Also, the government of other nations has stopped the consumption of meat to protect wildlife. In addition to, the demerit of vegetarian food is it is not available in the cold regions such as Antartica; there people do not have any choice. Moreover, meat not only assists then to keep their body warm, but also they are protected from any furious creature. Therefore, due to the above reasons people can not deny the use of meat for healthy diet as meat is the need of the hour in that cases. To conclude, I believe the above mentioned reasons are evident to state that no doubt other products such as milk fulfill the requirement of meat, but in colder regions the importance of meat can not be denied.
It is
generally
reckoned that the
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meat
is not necessary for a healthy diet; it is the obligation of every individual to prefer the vegetarian
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food
;
likewise
, I concur to this notion as
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other
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products
such as milk
also
provide all the nutrients of
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meat
; the
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non vegetarian
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food
decreases the population of animals.

The prime catalyst behind my agreement to this statement is
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other
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products
fulfill the nutrients of
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meat
, owing in the contemporary era, there are multifarious dishes that are feasible in the market such as milk, egg; these things are
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fulfill
the amount of vitamin D, proteins. Probing ahead, the individuals eat
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meat
either to increase the power of their brain, or the
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meat
is recommended
by the doctors during any maladies.
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But
, nowadays doctors
also
understand the value of
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other
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products
; they suggest egg to their patients
instead
of
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meat
. A
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good
example of this is the American
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government
has put a ban on the
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consumption
of
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meat
as 50% of American citizens become obese due to the over
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consumption
of
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meat
, according to the 'Meat
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Consumption
Report'.
Hence
, it is
clearly
evident that the preference
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must
be
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given
to the vegetarian food.

Further
, reinforcing my
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idea
the
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consumption
of
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non vegetarian
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food
influence the population of animals for the reason the enormous rise has
been witnessed
in
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the populous of
homo sapiens; the demand of
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food
is
also
increasing day by day;
that is
why the Chinese authorities compel the citizens of China to eat
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meat
that cause 50% reduction on the population of dogs, fishes etc.
Also
, the
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government
of
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other
nations has
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stopped
the
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consumption
of
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meat
to protect wildlife.

In addition
to, the demerit of vegetarian
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food
is it is not available in the
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cold
regions such as
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Antartica
; there
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people
do not have any choice.
Moreover
,
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meat
not
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only
assists then to
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keep
their body warm,
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but
also
they
are protected
from any furious creature.
Therefore
, due to the above reasons
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people
can not deny the
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use
of
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meat
for healthy diet as
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meat
is the need of the hour in that cases.

To conclude
, I believe the above mentioned reasons are evident to state that no doubt
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other
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products
such as milk fulfill the requirement of
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meat
,
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but
in colder regions the importance of
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meat
can not
be denied
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the meat shuld not eat but the vegetarian food good for healthy diet

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
389 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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