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“Myself and the Solar System”

“Myself and the Solar System” Oy36E
We are just a speck of dust and formed into multiple things that helped us become who we are. I believe that the story I am in is rather in multiple ways of interpreting it. In a way, we all see ourselves is that each and one of us has their own story that they are the main character and other ways seeing as a side character or companion in theirs. I see that we could also be someone in their story who they met briefly. And believing that all of us have a reason being here is maybe for the future or for something big that is coming that would impact a lot of people. For me I see myself becoming in the future would be that me getting close to my goal of becoming a lot of things like finishing my studies and working for a while and have a proper foundation to start my dream or future goal. There are always things that are like obstacles to my dream. And the things that I see that are helping me that helps me keep on going for my dream are the positivity that I am always thinking of. I see myself as the Moon because when you look at the moon it makes you feel lonely or someone who was 2 sides the 1 side showing happiness but the other side that most people see or sometimes see is that sad side.
We are
just
a speck of dust and formed into multiple things that
helped
us become who we are. I believe that the story I am in is
rather
in multiple ways of interpreting it. In a way, we all
see
ourselves is that each and one of us has their
own
story that they are the main character and other ways seeing as a side character or companion in theirs. I
see
that we could
also
be someone in their story who they met
briefly
. And believing that all of us have a reason being here is maybe for the future or for something
big
that is
coming that would impact
a lot of
people
. For me I
see
myself becoming in the future would be that me getting close to my goal of becoming
a lot of
things like finishing my studies and working for a while and have a proper foundation to
start
my dream or future goal. There are always things that are like obstacles to my dream. And the things that I
see
that are helping me that
helps
me
keep
on going for my dream are the positivity that I am always thinking of. I
see
myself as the Moon
because
when you look at the moon it
makes
you feel lonely or someone who was 2
sides
the 1 side showing happiness
but
the other side that most
people
see
or
sometimes
see
is that sad side.
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IELTS essay “Myself and the Solar System”

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
244 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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