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At first glance living In a completely different country is hard, right? It may be a very difficult experience for children my age, but overcoming difficulties is my hobby. First of all, I was very happy to read the title of this topic, because I knew exactly what I had to write. from the very beginning I thought about stages which I would have to go in case of winning, it would be leaving the family, move in a new home, living with a new family, new rules, new school and new experiences. Luckily I love changes so much, I can easily get used to the new environment. Covid Pandemic also helped me to understand this. During the quarantine, I was locked in the village for months with only my grandfather. While I was mostly dependent on my mother who helped me with everything, I did all the chores while I was in the village, it was housework, helping my grandfather, online school, taking care of myself. that was a really good experience. I was able to do all this on my own and most importantly independently which makes me really happy. I fully hope for myself to be sensible in any tense or difficult situation. This skills obviously makes easy to adaptation. For me, justice is very important and I understand the role and responsibility of the parents towards children. so the rules that my parents impose are completely clear to me and I can assess the situation from a parent's points of view too. New steps are what keep me motivated in life, news is never bad, a goal that will grow personally is very important to me and this can’t be prevented by such small things as different rules.
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glance living In a completely
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, right? It may be a
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very
difficult experience for children my age,
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overcoming difficulties is my hobby.
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First of all
, I was
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happy to read the title of this topic,
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because
I knew exactly what I had to write.
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from
the
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very
beginning I
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thought
about stages which I would
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have to
go in case of winning, it would be leaving the family,
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move
in a
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home, living with a
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family,
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new
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rules
,
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school and
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experiences. Luckily I
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love
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changes
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much, I can
easily
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get
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used
to the
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environment.
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Pandemic
also
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helped
me to understand this. During the quarantine, I
was locked
in the village for months with
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only
my grandfather. While I was
mostly
dependent on my mother who
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helped
me with everything, I did all the chores while I was in the village, it was housework, helping my grandfather, online school, taking care of myself.
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that
was a
really
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experience. I was able to do all this on my
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and most
importantly
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really
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fully
hope for myself to be sensible in any tense or difficult situation.
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skills
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makes
easy to adaptation.

For me, justice is
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and I understand the role and responsibility of the parents towards children.
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so
the
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rules
that my parents impose are completely
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clear
to me and I can assess the situation from a parent's points of view too.

New steps are what
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keep
me motivated in life,
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is never
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bad
, a goal that will grow
personally
is
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very
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important
to me and this can’t be
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prevented
by such
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things as
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rules
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IELTS essay glance living In a completely different country is hard

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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