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Some people think that the increasing use of computers, and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills. v.3

Some people think that the increasing use of computers, and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills. v. 3
One of the most debatable issue today relates to development of computer and cell phone has some drawbacks on the young people' s reading and writing skills. Presenting my view. I would intend to explore the aforementioned view in upcoming paragraphs One side of the argument that people who argue that the today' s era study skills is directly impacted by the communication devices. Considerably out weigh it' s disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that it is a bitter truth some of the people turn up to prefer the writing in computer but they also diprived of writing skills. The chief cause might be that students spend much more time to use the mobile phones. Moreover, Microsoft word is used by some companies. This must be because of, number of facilities is provided by this software. For instance, when a people write the wrong word so it erase by few a seconds. On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argue that now a days news paper is being readed by students in the mobile phones. As a consequence, students vocabulary have been improved by this further development. Subsequently to that, students writing skills is being improved by the using of digital keyboard. To conclusion, although there are good reason to use the mobile and computer directly effect on writing and reading skills. But in opinion digital keyboard is a further development.
One of the most debatable issue
today
relates to development of computer and cell phone has
some
drawbacks on the young
people&
#039; s reading and
writing
skills
. Presenting my view. I would intend to explore the aforementioned view in upcoming
paragraphs


One side of the argument that
people
who argue that the
today&
#039; s era study
skills
is
directly
impacted by the communication devices.
Considerably
out weigh
it&
#039; s disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that it is a bitter truth
some of the
people
turn up to prefer the
writing
in computer
but
they
also
diprived
of
writing
skills
. The chief cause might be that
students
spend much more time to
use
the mobile phones.
Moreover
,
Microsoft word
is
used
by
some
companies
. This
must
be
because
of, number of facilities
is provided
by this software.
For instance
, when a
people
write the
wrong
word
so
it
erase
by few
a seconds
.

On the other hand
, it is
also
possible to
make
the opposing case. It is
often
argue that
now a days
news paper
is being
readed
by
students
in the mobile phones. As a consequence,
students
vocabulary have been
improved
by this
further
development.
Subsequently
to that,
students
writing
skills
is being
improved
by the using of digital keyboard.

To conclusion, although there are
good
reason to
use
the mobile and computer
directly
effect on
writing
and reading
skills
.
But
in opinion digital keyboard is a
further
development.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that the increasing use of computers, and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skills. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
243 words
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