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Some people think that the government should restrict the uses of water due to the limited resources on the other side people think that they can use water as much as they want discuss both of use and give your opinion

Some people think that the government should restrict the uses of water due to the limited resources on the other side people think that they can use water as much as they want discuss both of use and give your opinion 7aAGY
It is imperative that water is a source of living. Without water, we cannot cannot imagine our life. One school of thought of opine that obligation of supply of freshwater by government should be restricted due to the limited resources. I would say people should think before having excessive usage of water in. This essay will discuss reasonable grounds in upcoming paragraphs. Are one of the most plausible reason of my assumption is in the sport of authorities. The consumption of water should be limited and should be saved for our future generation. To be more precise, if you persistently use a water what we will give to our or grandchildren? We need to think for 23rd century. No doubt, there is a plenty of water available but excessive usage leads to depletion of other resources. For pragmatic instance, regime can implement stringent rules and regulations towards utilization of water. By limiting time and quantity of water will be useful like laundry should be done only on weekends instead of doing twice in a week. On the other hand, opponents give credence towards that they can use water as much as they want. We cannot even live for more than two hours without drinking water. If water supply will be bounded, it will create arduous circumstances especially for poor people. It is affordable for affluent people to pay for water but will poor one's have to suffer. In compendium, nevertheless it is essential to use water according to the need not according to the wish but I still believe that executives can control to save water for our upcoming generations.
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water
is a source of living. Without
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water
, we
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cannot cannot
imagine our life. One school of
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thought
of opine that obligation of supply of freshwater by
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government
should
be restricted
due to the limited resources. I would say
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people
should
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think
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before
having excessive usage of
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water
in. This essay will discuss reasonable grounds in upcoming paragraphs.

Are one of the most plausible reason of my assumption is in the sport of authorities. The consumption of
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water
should
be limited
and should
be saved
for our future generation. To be more precise, if you
persistently
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use
a
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water
what we will give to our or grandchildren? We need to
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think
for 23rd century. No doubt, there is a
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plenty
of
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water
available
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but
excessive usage leads to depletion of other resources. For pragmatic instance, regime can implement stringent
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rules
and regulations towards utilization of
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water
. By limiting time and quantity of
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water
will be useful like laundry should
be done
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only
on weekends
instead
of doing twice in a week.

On the other hand
, opponents give credence towards that they can
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use
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water
as much as they want. We cannot even
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live
for more than two hours without drinking
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water
. If
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water
supply will
be bounded
, it will create arduous circumstances
especially
for poor
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people
. It is affordable for affluent
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people
to pay for
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water
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but
will poor one's
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have to
suffer.

In compendium,
nevertheless
it is essential to
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use
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water
according to the need not according to the wish
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but
I
still
believe that executives can control to save
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water
for our upcoming generations.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the government should restrict the uses of water due to the limited resources on the other side people think that they can use water as much as they want discuss both of use and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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