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Some people think that the government should make university education free for all students, regardless of their financial situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the government should make university education free for all students, regardless of their financial situation. KRlk
These days, public debate has been going on over whether the government should make tertiary education free for all students. I tend to believe that higher education should be free – for the following reasons. Three main factors support the idea of free university education. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that many students cannot afford university education, although they truly want to get degrees. Obviously, without enough financial resources, these students have to give up their dreams, which is unfair to them. Besides, the government is already wasting taxpayers’ money on projects such as space exploration by making spaceships – the fund should be spent on university education. That is to say, the government would be well-advised to allocate resources in a more sensible way. A third reason for my belief is that high tuition fees may prevent some students from studying at university. It is widely recognised that many young people are reluctant to face their loans after graduation, which means such a burden might make university education less attractive. I I admit that students’ financial contributions to higher education helps universities to improve facilities. Despite that, a more reasonable government funds allocation can solve this issue, for which we can find plenty of evidence from our own experience. In conclusion, I would argue that tertiary education should be paid by the government. Accordingly, it would be generally advisable for the government to allocate financial resources in a more beneficial way
These days, public debate has been going on over whether the
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should be free
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. The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that
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cannot afford
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, although they
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want to
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degrees.
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financial resources, these
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have to
give up their dreams, which is unfair to them.
Besides
, the
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is already wasting taxpayers’ money on projects such as space exploration by making spaceships
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–
the fund should
be spent
on
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university
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education
.
That is
to say, the
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would be well-advised to allocate resources in a more sensible way. A third reason for my belief is that high tuition fees may
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prevent
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from studying at
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. It is
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are reluctant to face their loans after graduation, which means such a burden might
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make
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university
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less attractive.
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financial contributions to higher
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to
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facilities. Despite that, a more reasonable
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funds allocation can solve this issue, for which we can find
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of evidence from our
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experience.

In conclusion
, I would argue that tertiary
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should
be paid
by the
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.
Accordingly
, it would be
generally
advisable for the
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to allocate financial resources in a more beneficial way
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IELTS essay Some people think that the government should make university education free for all students, regardless of their financial situation.

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