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some people think that the goverment should provide free education at every level.However,some says that individuals should pay for their university education.

some people think that the goverment should provide free education at every level. However, some says that individuals should pay for their university education. dA1X
Some citizens belive that as a part of country we have the responsibility to pay for our University education. Whereas Some crowd belive that higher authorities should devote free teaching to youth. In my opinion, I have a mixed view on these statement. This essay will examine both the phenomenon of the points. On the one hand public demand for the ministry to give schooling at no cost to civilians. The fact is that, their are families of low wages, Neverthless, they have to face challenging promblems to deal with such as health care, education. for instance, A student want to pursue is Master degree but he can not beacause of family financial promblems. As a result, he have to quit his dreams On the contrary, The goverment has to invest in numerous other sectors of the country. Ranging from transpotation to culture. undoubtedly They have to balance the economy. Although in some rural areas costless training is provided from 1st to 12th grade. Especially, it is our needs for the tutelage. Furthemore, we have to support the union in such issues. In my conclusion, state have to dedicate dollars in the free education till certain age, while at a stage of maturity the student should earn their own and manage their overhead expensens. which is beneficial for his personality and mental developement.
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crowd
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belive
that higher authorities should devote free teaching to youth. In my opinion, I have a mixed view on
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these statement
. This essay will examine both the phenomenon of the points. On the one hand public demand for the ministry to give schooling at no cost to civilians. The fact is that,
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their
are families of low wages,
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Neverthless
, they
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face challenging
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promblems
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goverment
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has to
invest in numerous other sectors of the country. Ranging from
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transpotation
to culture.
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undoubtedly
They
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have to
balance the economy.
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Although
in
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some
rural areas
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costless
training
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from 1st to 12th grade.
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, it is our needs for the tutelage.
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Furthemore
, we
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have to
support the union in such issues. In my conclusion, state
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have to
dedicate dollars in the free education till certain age, while at a stage of maturity the student should earn their
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own
and manage their overhead
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expensens
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which
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developement
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IELTS essay some people think that the goverment should provide free education at every level. However, some says that individuals should pay for their university education.

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