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some people think that the environment problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that the problems can not be solved if individuals do not take some actions. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

some people think that the environment problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that the problems can not be solved if individuals do not take some actions. PMqJ2
The world now is facing severe environmental issues which affect human life in various aspects. The solutions come to public debate that neither each citizen alone can solve this massive problem nor any chance the earth could heal itself without individual interferences. Both views are true at some point, and in this essay, we will discuss them more specific. From the first view, it is undeniable that environmental issues are beyond the power of ordinary citizens. The earth manages a massive system that links all countries, seas, and the atmosphere together; a minor problem could affect all other parts in this circle then turn it into a severe planet issue. For that reason, individuals’ actions are just too small to compare with what is happening on our earth. Besides, environmental issues related to national resources like forests, water, therefore all are controlled by the authorities, which means no ordinary citizen could take action themselves without the government’s approval or acceptance. However, even a vast circumstance like degradation should be supported by each citizen because human cooperation could defeat any struggle no matter how big it is. The government has the responsibility to handle this difficulty by enacting new regulations and policies to protect the environment. However, they are all become nonsense without the population’s help. Furthermore, human activities have spread power that can manipulate others to do the same things even they do not intend to do it at the beginning. This could be explained by 2011 psychological experiment conducted at the University of Chicago; this research report 80% of people interviewed told that they have the tendency to be inspired by somebody’s actions, especially positive one, which leads them to do the same thing. In conclusion, environmental problems are the concern of the whole world for decades. People always hesitate to take any action because of their disbelief about their minor actions’ power. However, there is still a long way of the target of reviving a pristine nature, and only with constant devotion both from the authorities and the citizens, the process can be greatly accelerated.
The world
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now
is facing severe
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environmental
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issues
which affect human life in various aspects. The solutions
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come
to public debate that neither each
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citizen
alone can solve this massive problem nor any chance the earth could heal itself without individual interferences. Both views are true at
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some
point, and in this essay, we will discuss them more specific.

From the
first
view, it is undeniable that
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environmental
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issues
are beyond the power of ordinary
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citizens
. The earth manages a massive system that links all countries, seas, and the atmosphere together; a minor problem could affect all other parts in this circle then turn it into a severe planet
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issue
. For that reason, individuals’ actions are
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just
too
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small
to compare with what is happening on our earth.
Besides
,
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environmental
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issues
related to national resources like forests, water,
therefore
all
are controlled
by the authorities, which means no ordinary
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citizen
could take
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action
themselves without the
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government
’s approval or acceptance.

However
, even a vast circumstance like degradation should
be supported
by each
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citizen
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because
human cooperation could defeat any struggle no matter how
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big
it is. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
has the responsibility to handle this difficulty by enacting new regulations and policies to protect the environment.
However
, they are all become nonsense without the population’s
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.
Furthermore
, human activities have spread power that can manipulate others to do the same things even they do not intend to do it at the beginning. This could be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
by 2011 psychological experiment conducted at the University of Chicago; this research report 80% of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
interviewed
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told
that they have the tendency to
be inspired
by somebody’s actions,
especially
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positive
one, which leads them to do the same thing.

In conclusion
,
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environmental
problems are the concern of the whole world for decades.
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People
always hesitate to take any
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action
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because
of their disbelief about their minor actions’ power.
However
, there is
still
a long way of the target of reviving a pristine nature, and
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only
with constant devotion both from the authorities and the
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citizens
, the process can be
greatly
accelerated.
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IELTS essay some people think that the environment problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that the problems can not be solved if individuals do not take some actions.

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