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Review of capitalization and punctuation.

Review of capitalization and punctuation. x0nLo
Mr. and Mrs. Kramer don’t live in town, they live in a farmhouse in Vermont. It’s cold in the winter but it isn’t expensive to heat the farmhouse. they have many trees on their land, so they usually burn wood. Today they’re cutting firewood for the winter next, they will put the logs on a large woodpile by the farmhouse. it’s not as expensive to live in the country but in the city, it is everyone in the city has to pay for oil.
Mr. and Mrs. Kramer don’t
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live
in town, they
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live
in a farmhouse in Vermont. It’s
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cold
in the winter
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but
it isn’t expensive to heat the farmhouse.
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they
have
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many
trees on their land,
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so
they
usually
burn wood.
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Today
they’re cutting firewood for the winter
next
, they will put the logs on a large woodpile by the farmhouse.
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it
’s not as expensive to
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live
in the country
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but
in the city, it is everyone in the city
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has to
pay for oil.
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IELTS essay Review of capitalization and punctuation.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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