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Benefits of education and how it helps to improve our day to day life

Benefits of education and how it helps to improve our day to day life N8QAW

Education is very important part of our life. it teachers us how to behave in our society and how to change the thinking of people regarding blackmagic, child marriage, etc. If we are educated we can make others also educated by making poor children study. There are many backward thinking people around us we can change that. education teachers how to behave with our elders and youngers. Many children who belongs to poor family are not able to get education but now government schools give free education for poor children. We can develop our country if we are educated.

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