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Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newspapers while others think it is through online media. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newspapers while others think it is through online media. Discuss both views and give your opinion JoowE
After the establishment of digital online media still now there is a combat between online media and print media. There is a cobtrast thoughts among the people, some belive that newspapaer are the best way to get news while others think it is through online media. This essay will argue both the side of arguments in detail and provide why online media is significant than newspaper. People support newspapaer over the online media, this type of ideas are fixed for some people because they are not fully aware of the online media or they may be struck between the old living style. For old people its quite difficult for them to operate online media, so that only they don't support online media. I completely believe that their opinion might change if they were aware to use online media sucessfully. In contrast some people support online media over newspaper. The main uphold online media because they are more informative and approachable at any time. The news are watchable through mobile phones, laptops, tab etc. Most significantly they feel that online platforms provide latest news immediately, whereas it is is not even possible in newspaper as they only give day before news. Unlike newspaper we don't need to read each line in online media, v we have an option of both reading and listening. These facilities of online media overshadowed the advantages of newspaper. This essay argued the the mindset of people over newspaper and online media in both their perspective and in my opinion I completely support online media over newspaper as it has only few disadvantage like I problems and it is not even a consideration in this debate, whatever might people thing the newspaper is traditional method and it cannot provide latest news in seconds like online media is doing.
After the establishment of digital
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online
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media
still
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now
there is a combat between
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online
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media
and print
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media
. There is a
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cobtrast
thoughts among the
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people
,
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some
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belive
that
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newspapaer
are the best way to
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get
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news
while others
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think
it is through
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online
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media
. This essay will argue both the side of arguments in detail and provide why
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online
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media
is
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significant
than
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newspaper
.
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People
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support
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newspapaer
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over
the
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online
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media
, this type of
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ideas
are
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fixed
for
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people
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because
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fully
aware of the
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online
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living style. For
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people
its quite difficult for them to operate
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,
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so
that
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only
they don't
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support
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online
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. I completely believe that their opinion might
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change
if they were aware to
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use
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online
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media
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sucessfully
. In
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contrast
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people
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over
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. The main uphold
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because
they are more informative and approachable at any time. The
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news
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are
watchable through mobile phones, laptops, tab etc. Most
significantly
they feel that
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online
platforms provide
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latest
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news
immediately, whereas it
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is is
not even possible in
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newspaper
as they
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only
give day
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before
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news
. Unlike
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don't need to read each line in
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online
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, v we have an option of both reading and listening. These facilities of
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online
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overshadowed the advantages of
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. This essay argued
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the the
mindset of
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over
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and
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in both their perspective and in my opinion I completely
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support
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online
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over
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as it has
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few disadvantage like
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I problems
and it is not even a consideration in this debate, whatever might
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people
thing the
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is traditional method and it cannot provide
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latest
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news
in seconds like
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is doing.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newspapers while others think it is through online media. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
301 words
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