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Some people think that the best way to get news in through newspapers while others think it is through online media discuss both views and give your

Some people think that the best way to get news in through newspapers while others think it is through online media discuss both views and give your y37g
Getting news is beneficial for everyone as with it, we can easily know about what is happening all over the world. Some ponder that to get news, newspapers play predominant role in society. Whereas according to opponents, online media is more convenient than that of newspapers. In the further coming paragraphs, I intend to discuss both views and I personally side with the latter. To initiate with, to get news, some people prefer to purchase newspaper because they think that it is the best way to know about happening. It is not give only benefit to their eyesight but also enhance their reading skills. According to the latest survey, for instance, which was conducted by BBC authority, those individuals, who read newspaper on the daily basis they scored double in academic activities as compared to other learners. Moreover, it is not costly so every individual can buy it with ease and also after reading, it is used for other purposes, such as to cover notebook and wrap something in it. On the flip side, electronic media is liked by opponents of newspapers. Online mode of getting news is portable as well as convenient as much as newspapers but difference is that, with it, individuals can get latest news in just a few seconds whether it belongs to National or International level. Online media works fast. Along with it, people does not feel bored because it's attractive way of presenting news attract viewers. Sometimes, for instance, when they have no mood for reading news, they can easily change site with just a click and rejuvenate their mood. In compendium, after deliberating all the aspects of above it may be mentioned that both means of getting news have their own significance. Although, newspapers are the unbreakable part of society but I prefer to read online mode due to it's allurement.
Getting
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news
is beneficial for everyone as with it, we can
easily
know about what is happening all over the world.
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Some
ponder that to
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get
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news
,
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newspapers
play predominant role in society. Whereas according to opponents,
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online
media is more convenient than that of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
. In the
further
coming paragraphs, I intend to discuss both views and I
personally
side with the latter. To initiate with, to
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get
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news
,
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some
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people
prefer to
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purchase
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newspaper
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because
they
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think
that it is the best way to know about happening. It is not give
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only
benefit to their eyesight
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but
also
enhance their reading
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skills
. According to the latest survey,
for instance
, which
was conducted
by BBC authority, those individuals, who read
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newspaper
on the daily basis they scored double in academic activities as compared to other learners.
Moreover
, it is not costly
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so
every individual can
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buy
it with
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ease
and
also
after reading, it is
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used
for other purposes, such as to cover notebook and wrap something in it. On the flip side, electronic media
is liked
by opponents of
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newspapers
.
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Online
mode of getting
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news
is portable
as well
as convenient as much as
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newspapers
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but
difference is that, with it, individuals can
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get
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
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news
in
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just
a few seconds whether it belongs to National or International level.
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Online
media works
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fast
. Along with it,
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people
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does
not feel bored
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because
it's
Please check whether an article is missing: "a attractive".
attractive
way of presenting
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news
attract viewers.
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Sometimes
,
for instance
, when they have no mood for reading
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news
, they can
easily
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change
site with
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just
a click and rejuvenate their mood. In compendium, after deliberating all the aspects of above it may
be mentioned
that both means of getting
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news
have their
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own
significance. Although,
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newspapers
are the unbreakable part of society
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but
I prefer to read
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online
mode due
Did you mean "to its allurement"?
to it's allurement
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the best way to get news in through newspapers while others think it is through online media discuss both views and give your

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
308 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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