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For several years now, various e-books and websites presenting articles as well as worldwide news are being used by an increasing number of people. Therefore, printed newspapers or books are slowly getting abandoned and replaced by modern alternatives. It seems to me that despite the great comfort of online books or other readable resources, the printed newspapers or books will not be forgotten in near future. In the first place, numerous people may encounter with the major issue of access to the Internet. No matter how comfortable the online journals of books are, they are still not fully free, owing to the fact that person needs to pay for Internet access. Even if the costs are not enormous, he or she must have a device to access the Internet, which is needed to be bought. Following this, e-books harm reader’s eyesight. Even people who have bought special tablets for e-books, which do not harm eyes significantly, still use smartphones most of the time, which kills their eyesight. For example, quick check of a magazine or world news will be done from a mobile phone in most of the cases. Lastly, it is undeniable that the elderly make up a large segment of population which buys paper journals and books, rather than read them online. This happens because of the elderly’s mind: they do not approve of anything new because of their conservative view on things. They also strongly believe that anything electronic harms not only eyesight, but also the brain in general. To draw the line, due to the Internet issues, health problemsand continuous paper book usage, a variety of e-books and magazines cannot make the audience totally refuse the published newspapers and books.
For several years
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now
, various e-books and websites presenting articles
as well
as worldwide news are being
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used
by an increasing number of
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people
.
Therefore
, printed newspapers or
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books
are
slowly
getting abandoned and replaced by modern alternatives. It seems to me that despite the great comfort of online
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books
or other readable resources, the printed newspapers or
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books
will not
be forgotten
in near future.

In the
first
place, numerous
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people
may encounter with the major issue of access to the Internet. No matter how comfortable the online journals of
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books
are, they are
still
not
fully
free, owing to the fact that person needs to pay for Internet access. Even if the costs are not enormous, he or she
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must
have a device to access the Internet, which
is needed
to be
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bought
.

Following this, e-books harm reader’s eyesight. Even
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people
who have
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bought
special tablets for e-books, which do not harm eyes
significantly
,
still
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use
smartphones most of the time, which kills their eyesight.
For example
, quick
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check
of a magazine or world news will
be done
from a mobile phone in most of the cases.

Lastly
, it is undeniable that the elderly
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make
up a large segment of population which
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buys
paper journals and
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books
,
rather
than read them online. This happens
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because
of the elderly’s mind: they do not approve of anything new
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because
of their conservative view on things. They
also
strongly
believe that anything electronic harms not
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only
eyesight,
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but
also
the brain
in general
.

To draw the line, due to the Internet issues, health
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problemsand
continuous paper
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book
usage, a variety of e-books and magazines cannot
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make
the audience
totally
refuse the published newspapers and
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books
.

IELTS essay e-books will replace newspaper

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
284 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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