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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep? O36d
It is undoubtedly said that a number of people find a difficulty to have a sleep sufficient, that's why they complain on it. In this essay, we will address the issue for the lack of sleep also discuss on the which are the measurement to be taken care to get enough sleep. Issue about the not having a proper sleep is becoming rising among the many people in this hectic life style and some of them do complain to their family doctors. There are certain reasons behind this disease such as current life style, office working pressure or other medical issues. As we know that, for getting paid high salary, people started small business along with their regular paid job which lead to hyper tension and this can put a deep impression our health, therefore person getting fatigue physically as well as mentaly. Due to this heavy pressure, many health worker tell that our mind working during sleeping condition hence, brain need rest which will result into sleeping disorder. Now, we evaluate about the precousion for getting sleep well. Many suggests that sleeping pills but I would rather going to get pills, I would recommend to have better life style which can be develop by maintaining daily time table of our routine life. For example, make a schedule with deviding your time from early morning to night before sleeping time which should include all activity such as light exercise in early morning with meditation, taking a healthy breakfast on time, In addition, Maintain official working hours along with punctulity on lunch - dinner with daily leisure activities. With the help of time-table, we can come out from this lack of sleep problem. To conclude, each and every disorder has their reasons and treatment, thus we maintain our sleep with the help of daily activity's schedule and healthy food to avoid complain.
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undoubtedly
said that a number of
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people
find a difficulty to have a
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sleep
sufficient, that's why they complain on it. In this essay, we will address the issue for the lack of
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sleep
also
discuss on the which are the measurement to
be taken
care to
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get
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enough
sleep.

Issue about the not having a proper
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sleep
is becoming rising among the
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many
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people
in this hectic
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life
style and
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some
of them do complain to their family doctors. There are certain reasons behind this disease such as
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current
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life
style, office working pressure or other medical issues. As we know that, for getting paid high salary,
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people
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started
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small
business along with their regular paid job which lead to hyper tension and this can put a deep impression our health,
therefore
person getting fatigue
physically
as well
as
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mentaly
. Due to this heavy pressure,
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many health
worker
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tell
that our mind working during
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sleeping
condition
hence
, brain need rest which will result into
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sleeping
disorder.

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Now
, we evaluate about the
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precousion
for getting
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sleep
well.
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Many
suggests that
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sleeping
pills
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but
I would
rather
The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "go"
going
to
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get
pills, I would
The verb 'recommend' is used with the gerund form: "recommend having".
recommend to have
better
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life
style which can be
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develop
by maintaining daily
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time
table of our routine
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life
.
For example
,
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make
a schedule with
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deviding
your
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time
from early morning to night
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before
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sleeping
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time
which should include all activity such as light exercise in early morning with meditation, taking a healthy breakfast on
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time
,
In addition
, Maintain official working hours along with
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punctulity
on lunch
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-
dinner with daily leisure activities. With the
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help
of time-table, we can
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come
out from this lack of
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sleep
problem.

To conclude
, each and every disorder has their reasons and treatment,
thus
we maintain our
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sleep
with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of daily activity's schedule and healthy food to avoid complain.

IELTS essay Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

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4 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
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