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Some people think that the best way of getting information is newspaper. others people think that the best way to get information in television. Discuss each view and provide your opinion.

Some people think that the best way of getting information is newspaper. others people think that the best way to get information in television. Discuss each view and provide your opinion. G9MAw
In the modern era, newspaper and television have become an essential part of our everyday life for earn information. there are those people say that newspaper is the best way to find information. However, others believe that television is the proper system to take information. In this essay I will examine both side the argument and provide my overall opinion. Generally speaking, there are two main reason why people believe that newspaper is the old information sector, and it is a truly a way. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favour of this idea is become repository of information. Such as professional news, editorial news alway helps us. Secondly, our old citizen believe that its information can change our society, and it is a great way for information. Cause, we can find a lot of information from newspaper. Despite these arguments, many people feel that television for present life. The main reason why people think that this is a good idea is become it can easy process for achieving information. Such as just click on television switch. A Further point is favour of gather information is that is has more information channel. For example, maximum information is educational, entertainment, culture related. As a result, we can connect with information, and we can see and hear as well as perceive. In conclusion, I must be say that newspaper always play an essential role in our society. On the other hand television is the best choice and Technology for hi-tech era and information. I completely agree with this view point for some following reasons.
In the modern era,
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and
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have become an essential part of our everyday life for earn
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information
.
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there
are those
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people
say that
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newspaper
is the best way to find
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information
.
However
, others believe that
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television
is the proper system to take
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information
. In this essay I will examine both side the argument and provide my
overall
opinion.

Generally
speaking, there are two main
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reason
why
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people
believe that
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newspaper
is the
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old
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information
sector, and it is a
truly
a way. Perhaps the main
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reason
why
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people
are in
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favour
of this
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idea
is become
repository of
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information
. Such as professional news, editorial news
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alway
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helps
us.
Secondly
, our
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citizen believe that its
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information
can
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change
our society, and it is a great way for
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information
. Cause, we can find
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a lot of
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information
from newspaper.

Despite these arguments,
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people
feel that
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television
for present life. The main
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reason
why
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people
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think
that this is a
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good
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idea
is become
it can
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easy
process for achieving
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information
. Such as
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click on
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switch. A
Further
point is
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favour
of gather
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is
that is
has more
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information
channel.
For example
, maximum
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information
is educational, entertainment, culture related.
As a result
, we can connect with
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information
, and we can
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see
and hear
as well
as perceive.

In conclusion
, I
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must
be say that
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newspaper
always play an essential role in our society.
On the other hand
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television
is the best choice and Technology for hi-tech era and
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information
. I completely
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agree
with this view point for
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following
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.
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IELTS essay Some people think that the best way of getting information is newspaper. others people think that the best way to get information in television. Discuss each view and provide your opinion.

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