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Some people think that teenages years are happiest time of more people's lives other think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibility discuss both views and give your own openion

Some people think that teenages years are happiest time of more people's lives other think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibility discuss both views and give your own openion 1pb7

Firstly I am discuss with teenage years when teenage years are happiest time of most people lives. Since in the olden ages people are utilizes to playing and commiting some of adventure as the period of technology is not developed after a huge years later requirements are many they have more commitements such as schooling mobiles or other gadgets teenages are mostly addicted in Mobile phone several games such as free fire vast teenages are addicted in the games result priority of study is less lack of knowledgeSecoundly adult life adults life over all assumption is much boring although starts of doing work they gives priority to build home buying car to fridge washing machine AC so that commitment is high much pressure than teenage lifeBy concluding my essay neither teenages is good not adult is bad both life's are happiness in different perspective.

Firstly
 I am discuss with teenage years when teenage years are A determiner is probably missing here: "the happiest".the happiest
happiest
 time of most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. Since in the olden ages This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are utilizes to playing and Possible spelling mistake found.committingcommuting
commiting
Consider using "some adventure" or "some of the adventure".some adventuresome of the adventure
some of adventure
 as the period of technology is not developed after a huge Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "year"?year
years
 later requirements are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 they have more Possible spelling mistake found.commitments
commitements
 such as schooling mobiles or other gadgets Possible spelling mistake found.teenageteenagerteenagersteen ages
teenages
 are mostly
 addicted in Mobile phone several games such as free fire vast Possible spelling mistake found.teenageteenagerteenagersteen ages
teenages
are addicted
 in the games result priority of study is less lack of Possible spelling mistake found.
knowledgeSecoundly
 adult life adults life over all assumption is much boring although This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 of doing work they The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "give"give
gives
 priority to build home buying car to fridge washing machine AC This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that commitment is high much pressure than teenage Possible spelling mistake found.lifelikelylightlylivelyliveryLibby
lifeBy
 concluding my essay neither Possible spelling mistake found.teenageteenagerteenagersteen ages
teenages
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 not adult is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 both life's are happiness in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 perspective. 