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Some people think that students in single-sex schools provide children with better social skills for adults life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Some people think that students in single-sex schools provide children with better social skills for adults life. ELj3b
It is said that modern parents prefer their children register to the single-sex schools to mixed schools due to the high quality given. On the contrary, some people dispute that it will lack of social life skill in the future as a result. From my point of view, two genders tend to live in one class and this essay will clarify obviously about this arguement. To begin, as a kid or a teenageers, it's high time for learning anything about reality life. They ought to approach and interact each other for creating th e fullfilment thinkings that affect enormously on the future personalities. Living together in a mutual environment will teach them respect the opposite sex and lend a sympathetic ear to perceive the whole pros and cons. This work will encouerage their own perception of stay in harmony with others. In addition, when individual come to marriage age, it wil support remarkably in choosing the suitable wife/husband for retirement life. Otherwises, in many society relationships, people has diplomatic answer will be conveniented in maintain a friendship or basically have on good terms with others. In reality, there will have plenty of advantages when studying in single-sex schools. Teacher will easily grasp the whole class and students also find the best journey to improve their potential ability. To some extent, every human exist different tendencies with numerous talents so teacher will active their possibilities by special techniques as long as achieve the breakthrough consequences. Hence, single-sex envieronment allow students to choose their own curriculum which is satisfied the curious of them. In conclusion, I conclude that studying in single-sex school will face more reality trial. Personally, I think parents must concern carefully with the decison because the endpoint is not in therapies.
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is said
that modern parents prefer their children register to the single-sex
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schools
to mixed
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schools
due to the high quality
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given
.
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,
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some
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people
dispute that it will lack of social life
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skill
in the future
as a result
. From my point of view, two genders tend to
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live
in one
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class
and this essay will clarify
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about this
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arguement
.

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begin
, as a kid or a
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teenageers
, it's high time for learning anything about reality life. They ought to approach and interact each other for creating
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th e
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fullfilment
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thinkings
that affect
enormously
on the future personalities. Living together in a mutual environment will teach them respect the opposite sex and lend a sympathetic ear to perceive the whole pros and cons. This work will
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encouerage
their
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own
perception of stay in harmony with others.
In addition
, when individual
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come
to marriage age, it
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wil
support
remarkably
in choosing the suitable wife/husband for retirement life.
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Otherwises
, in
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many
society relationships,
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people
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has
diplomatic answer will be
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conveniented
in maintain a friendship or
basically
have on
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good
terms with others.

In reality, there will have
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plenty
of advantages when studying in single-sex
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schools
. Teacher will
easily
grasp the whole
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class
and students
also
find the best journey to
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improve
their potential ability. To
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some
extent, every human exist
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different
tendencies with numerous talents
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so
teacher will active their possibilities by special techniques as long as achieve the breakthrough consequences.
Hence
, single-sex
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envieronment
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allow
students to choose their
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own
curriculum which
is satisfied
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the curious of
them.

In conclusion
, I conclude that studying in single-sex
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school
will face more reality trial.
Personally
, I
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think
parents
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must
concern
carefully
with the
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decison
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because
the endpoint is not in therapies.
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IELTS essay Some people think that students in single-sex schools provide children with better social skills for adults life.

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