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Teenagers works in the house

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Although most of the teenagers and children don’t have any additional tasks instead of their school works, Teenagers in previous decades have lots of works to do It was a common way that they lived. They had to go shopping, do lots of housework in addition young boys went to their parents work and helping them with their jobs. While these days, these things are uncommon and informal, children at that period had lots of things to do and it was not strange and wired for children and their parents. In spite new family just work hard for getting more facilities to their children they didn’t give them any other school tasks to them. In my opinion, the average between that period and these days would be an efficient way for parents and their children. Children with extra tasks would prepare for adulthood efficiently and most of the time they feel satisfied with having serious works and helping their parents.
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in previous decades have lots of works to do It was a common way that they
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. They had to go shopping, do lots of housework
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and helping them with their jobs. While these days, these things are uncommon and informal,
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at that period had lots of things to do and it was not strange and wired for
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. In spite new family
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for getting more facilities to their
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children
they didn’t give them any other school tasks to them. In my opinion, the average between that period and these days would be an efficient way for
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parents
and their
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children
.
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with extra tasks would prepare for adulthood
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IELTS essay Teenagers works in the house

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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