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Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. XLpA

some people enjoying their birthday's and anniversaries with their loved one's while the other people believe as a waste of money. This essay will widely elaborate the views in details and reach to a conclusion. Celebrations are known to be one of the popular activity among the many people lives today. There is a grown number of people are now dealing with the busy life styles so now they were able understand the value of freedom. In my office, me and colleagues are going to the dinner outings near the resturants

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people
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