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Some people think that science should be part of education while other think not everybody should study science. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that science should be part of education while other think not everybody should study science. g5qg1
One of the cospicuous trend's in todays world is that there is colossal increase in the number of people beleiving that there are plethora of benefits if people study science. While, other hold the view that it should not be imposed on everyone. I will discuss both the view's of scenario before coming on to a logical conclusion. First and foremost, every subject is equally important to lavish the student's carrier. But, science holds equal importance.
One of the
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cospicuous
trend's in
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todays
world is that there is colossal increase in the number of
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people
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beleiving
that there are plethora of benefits if
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people
study science.
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While
, other hold the view that it should not
be imposed
on everyone. I will discuss both the view's of scenario
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before
coming on to a logical conclusion.

First
and foremost, every subject is
equally
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important
to lavish the student's carrier.
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But
, science holds equal importance.
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IELTS essay Some people think that science should be part of education while other think not everybody should study science.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
76 words
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