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In the past five years, even e-mail (1) became obsolete. Texting on mobile phones is now more popular than e-mail. Few mobile phones owners desire (2) sit in front of computers to send formal e-mail messages. Most (3) chose to text by phone because they (4) should do it anytime and anywhere; however texting while driving (5) must be extremely dangerous.

In the past five years, even e-mail (1) became obsolete. Texting on mobile phones is now more popular than e-mail. Few mobile phones owners desire (2) sit in front of computers to send formal e-mail messages. Most (3) chose to text by phone because they (4) should do it anytime and anywhere; however texting while driving (5) must be extremely dangerous. QLKe1
In the past five years, even e-mail (1) became obsolete. Texting on mobile phones is now more popular than e-mail. Few mobile phones owners desire (2) sit in front of computers to send formal e-mail messages. Most (3) chose to text by phone because they (4) should do it anytime and anywhere; however texting while driving (5) must be extremely dangerous.
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formal e-mail messages. Most (3) chose to text by phone
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IELTS essay In the past five years, even e-mail (1) became obsolete. Texting on mobile phones is now more popular than e-mail. Few mobile phones owners desire (2) sit in front of computers to send formal e-mail messages. Most (3) chose to text by phone because they (4) should do it anytime and anywhere; however texting while driving (5) must be extremely dangerous.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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