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University should offer to choice one subject to students instead giving multi subject . To what extend do you agree with or not?

University should offer to choice one subject to students instead giving multi subject. qV1dE
In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that education is one of the most important need for this modern world. Education is platform where dumbbles are dimise and diamonds are polished. Some people deem that university should offer one subject to students instead of giving multi subjects to learn. However, I am quibble form them and propound that multi subject giving better understanding to students rather than provide one subject.
In this concurrent world, it is
undoubtedly
true that education is one of the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
need for this modern world. Education is platform where
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dumbbles
are
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dimise
and diamonds
are polished
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
deem that university should offer one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subject
to students
instead
of giving multi
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
to learn.
However
, I am quibble form them and propound that multi
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subject
giving better understanding to students
rather
than provide one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subject
.
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IELTS essay University should offer to choice one subject to students instead giving multi subject.

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