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Today many big cities in the world are increasing in size .what are the advantage and disadvantage.

Today many big cities in the world are increasing in size. what are the advantage and disadvantage. 7a0Qy
From last two decades the people have been shifted in mega cities due to the availability of diverse resources. I will shed on light of the day by day increasing size of cities and tackling with the problem which is occurring throughout. To commence with, the scarcity of continuing water supply, amenities, shelter and education is forced to people to migrate in developed cities. The exorbitant preposition of youngsters immigrate for acquiringhigher education. moreover, The metropolitan cities are
From last two decades the
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people
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been shifted
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due to the availability of diverse resources. I will shed on light of the day by day increasing size of
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cities
and tackling with the problem which is occurring throughout.

To commence with, the scarcity of continuing water supply, amenities, shelter and education
is forced
to
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people
to migrate in developed
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cities
. The exorbitant preposition of youngsters
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immigrate
for
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acquiringhigher
education.
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moreover
, The metropolitan
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cities
are
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IELTS essay Today many big cities in the world are increasing in size. what are the advantage and disadvantage.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
77 words
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