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some people think producing ethanol oil has many difficult steps. do you agree with this statement? summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

some people think producing ethanol oil has many difficult steps. Jo39D

The process give information about the ethanol oil is produced from grain. Overall, there are six steps to produce oil and are the last steps production of grain. Firstly, it can be seen the grain is storaged in the factory. The next, they put grain into the milling then it’s cooked into liquid. After that it’s fermented in bottle. Secondly, they distill to make fuel ethanol. It is dried then they transport to the feed market.

The process give information about the ethanol oil is produced
 from grain.

Overall
, there are six steps to produce oil and are the last steps production of grain.

Firstly
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 the grain is Possible spelling mistake found.storage
storaged
 in the factory. The next
, they put grain into the milling then it’s cooked into liquid. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that it’s fermented in bottle.

Secondly
, they distill to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 fuel ethanol. It is dried
 then they transport to the feed market. 