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Some people think that radio became out of Date and there is no need to listen radio for entertainment and news. Do you agree or disagree.

Many individuals believe that radio become obsolete and there is no importance to hear radio for amusement and tidings. I totally agree with the statement. To begin with, a lot of inventions has been done with the help of technology such as mobile phones and computers and due to these the impact of radio has faded. We can only hear the programs on radio without watching them and we can not change radio channels as our wish. Sometimes, numerous boring channels are heard on radio and we are compel to listen them. Radio stops working in bad weather conditions.
Many
individuals believe that
radio
become obsolete and there is no importance to hear
radio
for amusement and tidings. I
totally
agree
with the statement. To
begin
with,
a lot of
inventions has
been done
with the
help
of technology such as mobile phones and computers and due to these the impact of
radio
has faded. We can
only
hear the programs on
radio
without watching
them and
we can not
change
radio
channels as our wish.
Sometimes
, numerous boring channels
are heard
on
radio and
we are
compel
to listen them.
Radio
stops
working in
bad
weather conditions.
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IELTS essay Some people think that radio became out of Date and there is no need to listen radio for entertainment and news.

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  American English
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99 words
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