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Some people think that radio became out of Date and there is no need to listen radio for entertainment and news. Do you agree or disagree.

Many individuals believe that radio become obsolete and there is no importance to hear radio for amusement and tidings. I totally agree with the statement. To begin with, a lot of inventions has been done with the help of technology such as mobile phones and computers and due to these the impact of radio has faded. We can only hear the programs on radio without watching them and we can not change radio channels as our wish. Sometimes, numerous boring channels are heard on radio and we are compel to listen them. Radio stops working in bad weather conditions.

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 individuals believe that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
radio
 become obsolete and there is no importance to hear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
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 for amusement and tidings. I totally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the statement. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 inventions has been done
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help
 of technology such as mobile phones and computers and due to these the impact of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
radio
 has faded. We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 hear the programs on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
radio
 without watching Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).them, and
them and
 we can not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
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radio
 channels as our wish. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
, numerous boring channels are heard
 on Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).radio, and
radio and
 we are Consider using either the past participle “compelled” or the present participle “compelling” here.compelledcompelling
compel
 to listen them. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransmissionwireless
Radio
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
 working in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 weather conditions. 