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Some people believe that travelling alone really benefits learning a country’s culture and experience, while others believe it is better to travel with someone you know. Discuss both these views and share your opinion?

A few individuals believe that solo trips are helpful in gaining knowledge about a nation’s tradition and practices, whereas others opine that it is recommended to have a company along. Although, having someone to travel with makes the journey comfortable, I believe that traveling alone gives you more confidence to travel and explore new places. Travelling alone can be a daunting task and therefore a partner can be helpful, so having a helping hand can help you relax your mind and make the trip enjoyable. While exploring a new nation with a completely different language makes it difficult to communicate and in such cases a guide can help understand and also translate local language. He can not only help eradicate barriers of communication but also protect from any possible dangers. For example, a tour guide in Delhi helped a foreigner to find his lost passport with help of local people. However, I would argue that this could be done by filling a complain at the police station. Individuals taking a tour by themselves is a different experience as they embrace the risk of being alone and have a confident mindset. It helps them explore uncharted places and communicate with different people through expressions and actions having a better connection. This helps them to be a part of the local community and are more welcomed in their daily rituals and try their local cuisine. For instance, a traveller from Fox Travel landed in a remote village was welcomed by their community and was able to take part of their lifestyle. Therefore, I believe that a lone traveller has more advantage to experience a county’s culture than one with a company. In conclusion, though there is more safety and peace of mind in having a company, I maintain traveling alone has more merits because it helps the traveller to make his own decisions and forms a close relationship with native people.
A few individuals believe that solo trips are helpful in gaining knowledge about a nation’s tradition and practices, whereas others opine that it
is recommended
to have a
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company
along. Although,
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having
someone to travel with
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makes
the journey comfortable, I believe that traveling
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alone
gives you more confidence to travel and explore new places.

Travelling
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alone
can be a daunting task and
therefore
a partner can be helpful,
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so
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having
a helping hand can
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help
you relax your mind and
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make
the trip enjoyable. While exploring a new nation with a completely
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different
language
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makes
it difficult to communicate and in such cases a guide can
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help
understand and
also
translate
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local
language. He can not
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only
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help
eradicate barriers of communication
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but
also
protect from any possible
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dangers
.
For example
, a tour guide in Delhi
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helped
a foreigner to find his lost passport with
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help
of
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local
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people
.
However
, I would argue that this could
be done
by filling a
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complain
at the police station.

Individuals taking a tour by themselves is a
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different
experience as they embrace the
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risk
of being
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alone
and have a confident mindset. It
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helps
them explore uncharted places and communicate with
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different
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people
through expressions and actions
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having
a better connection. This
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helps
them to be a part of the
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local
community and are more welcomed in their daily rituals and try their
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local
cuisine.
For instance
, a
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traveller
from Fox Travel landed in a remote village
was welcomed
by their community and was able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
of their lifestyle.
Therefore
, I believe that a lone
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traveller
has more advantage to experience a county’s culture than one with a
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company
.

In conclusion
, though there is more safety and peace of mind in
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having
a
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company
, I maintain traveling
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alone
has more merits
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because
it
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helps
the
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traveller
to
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make
his
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own
decisions and forms a close relationship with native
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people
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that travelling alone really benefits learning a country’s culture and experience, while others believe it is better to travel with someone you know.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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