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Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. nP8P
Poverty can be a cause as well as an effect for several things. It does bring out the worst in people as desperate times call for desperate measures. However, in my perspective poverty might be a cause behind a number of crimes but not entirely. Commiting a crime is not something that happens just in the heat of the moment, it is learned gradually over a period of time. In analysing most criminals’ minds, one would notice faulty patterns of behaviours and beliefs. Now these beliefs are something that are evolved overtime if not treated sensitively, in no time these thoughts turn into behaviours and eventually become actions which result in repetitive habits. A disorder commonly seen in growing children is known as “ conduct disorder”. Characteristics of this disorder include showing age inappropriate behaviour, acting deviant from societal norms, threatening to harm oneself or others’ property. If children suffering from this disorder aren’t treated in therapy or counselling it might result in them leading a difficult life and turning into criminals. To a certain degree, one of the major reasons behind most crimes would be coined as psychological issues within a person, which is often referred to as ‘not being in the right state of mind’. To some extent, family values and environment around an individual also play a key role in determining their morals and behaviour. Seeing criminal activities in a positive light would just normalise it for everyone in the family. On the other hand, desperation owing to lack of resources and poverty might lead to people indulging in criminal acts but that cannot be pegged as the only reason for crimes. It is of no surety that people coming from a privileged background do not commit crimes. Finally, it may be concluded that reasons behind most crimes are an interface of a person’s psychological health and their family and personal values.
Poverty can be a cause
as well
as an effect for several things. It does bring out the worst in
people
as desperate times call for desperate measures.
However
, in my perspective poverty might be a cause behind a number of
crimes
but
not
entirely
.

Commiting
a
crime
is not something that happens
just
in the heat of the moment, it
is learned
gradually
over a period of time. In
analysing
most
criminals’
minds, one would notice faulty patterns of
behaviours
and beliefs.
Now
these beliefs are something that
are evolved
overtime if not treated
sensitively
, in no time these thoughts turn into
behaviours
and
eventually
become actions which result in repetitive habits. A disorder
commonly
seen
in growing children
is known
as
conduct disorder”. Characteristics of this disorder include showing age inappropriate
behaviour
, acting deviant from societal norms, threatening to harm oneself or others’ property. If children suffering from this disorder aren’t treated in therapy or counselling it might result in them leading a difficult life and turning into
criminals
. To a certain degree, one of the major reasons behind most
crimes
would
be coined
as psychological issues within a person, which is
often
referred to as ‘not being in the right state of mind’. To
some
extent, family values and environment around an individual
also
play a key role in determining their morals and
behaviour
. Seeing
criminal
activities in a
positive
light would
just
normalise
it for everyone in the family.

On the other hand
, desperation owing to lack of resources and poverty might lead to
people
indulging in
criminal
acts
but
that cannot
be pegged
as the
only
reason for
crimes
. It is of no surety that
people
coming from a privileged background do not commit crimes.

Finally
, it may
be concluded
that reasons behind most
crimes
are an interface of a person’s psychological health and their family and personal values.
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IELTS essay Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes.

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