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Some people think that plastic bags should be banned, while others say it should not be. What are the advantages and disadvantages of them?

Some people think that plastic bags should be banned, while others say it should not be. What are the advantages and disadvantages of them? XmbY
Some people think that there are not pluse sides of studying together in diffirent gender for pupils, however, others believe that there are merits for teenagers to study at the same school. I support a latter one because of exact reasons. Firstly, nowadays in most of school children are studying together as well as female and male. The most beneficial thing is that if government are parents allow to study with mixed gender for their children, they can achieve a high degree conversation with opposite genders. Also it helps them in their learning circumustances. Because
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of exact reasons.

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children are studying together
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government
are parents
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to study
with mixed gender for their children, they can achieve a high degree conversation with opposite genders.
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IELTS essay Some people think that plastic bags should be banned, while others say it should not be. What are the advantages and disadvantages of them?

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