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Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss, what is your opinion? v.5

Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss, what is your opinion? v. 5
Some opine that paying regular taxes is a sufficient contribution to the community. Others say that a good taxpayer should do more good works than that. While regular tax and vat from the civilian help to the developments, I personally believe people ought to participate others social work such as obey the law and order and try not to pollute the environment. On the one hand, it is irrefutable to every individual to pay their taxes in every year for the growth of the nations. Tax money helps the authorities to build new industries and transportation system which aid to boots local economy and creates lots of employment. For example, in the UK people pay their annual taxes on time and they don not try to hide their income or the source of it. As a result, the government takes care of education, health and all other basic needs. However, I think paying taxes cannot be an only responsibility of an ideal citizen since there are lots of areas where governments and the public need to work together. On the other hand, it is necessary for every individual to follow their nations law and order. Laws are made for the bad people who try to harm others in different ways. Abiding the code by everyone will make that nation crime free and people will live peacefully. In addition, residents should keep local environment clean by not throwing plastics anywhere. For instance, we could take Japanese people, they clean their places and whenever they go somewhere they clean that area. In the FIFA world cup 2018 we have seen them to clean the stadium after the match even though Japan lost that game. I think all of us should do our duty to make a better living and that will reduce the pressure from the local government. In conclusion, although many think that paying taxes to the authorities is the one and only responsibilities we have, obeying the law, making no crime and keeping the environment clean can be other duties. It is recommended that, if people should pay their taxes as well as they do their chores, it will make a beautiful community.
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Some
opine that paying regular
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taxes
is a sufficient contribution to the community. Others say that a
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good
taxpayer should do more
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good
works than that. While regular
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tax
and vat from the civilian
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help
to the developments, I
personally
believe
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people
ought to participate others social work such as obey the
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law
and order and try not to pollute the environment.

On the one hand, it is irrefutable to every individual to pay their
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taxes
in every year for the growth of the nations.
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Tax
money
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helps
the authorities to build new industries and transportation system which aid to boots local economy and creates lots of employment.
For example
, in the UK
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people
pay their annual
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taxes
on
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time and
they
Did you mean "do not"?
don not
try to
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hide
their income or the source of it.
As a result
, the
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government
takes care of education, health and all
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other
basic needs.
However
, I
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think
paying
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taxes
cannot be an
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only
responsibility of an ideal citizen since there are lots of areas where
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governments
and the public need to work together.

On the
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other
hand, it is necessary for every individual to follow their nations
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law
and order.
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Laws
are made
for the
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bad
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people
who try to harm others in
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different
ways. Abiding the code by everyone will
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make
that nation crime free and
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people
will
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live
peacefully
.
In addition
, residents should
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keep
local environment
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clean
by not throwing plastics anywhere.
For instance
, we could take Japanese
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people
, they
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clean
their places and whenever they go somewhere they
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clean
that area. In the
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FIFA world cup
2018 we have
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seen
them to
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clean
the stadium after the match
even though
Japan lost that game. I
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think
all of us should do our duty to
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make
a better living and that will
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reduce
the pressure from the local
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government
.

In conclusion
, although
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many
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think
that paying
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taxes
to the authorities is the one and
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only
responsibilities we have, obeying the
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law
, making no crime and keeping the environment
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clean
can be
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other
duties. It
is recommended
that, if
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people
should pay their
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taxes
as well
as they do their chores, it will
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make
a
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beautiful
community.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss, what is your opinion? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
363 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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