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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society .Others however believe that school is the place to learn this discuss both view and give yours opinion.

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others however believe that school is the place to learn this GMJNw
It is said that, some individuals argue on the children to learn about good members in learn about good members in the society with the help of parents and schools. In my view school is best to learn about membership. Firstly, children spend much time in the school. so, they get enough knowledge like leadership and etc. In my view, school is best to teach the children to carry the huge knowledge than the parents. because they spend much time in the school then the parents. Conclusion, students get huge knowledge from the school about membership.
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huge knowledge from the
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IELTS essay Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others however believe that school is the place to learn this

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