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Some people think that only those people who have been working in a company for a longer time should get a promotion. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that only those people who have been working in a company for a longer time should get a promotion. L9P9R
Although, basic studies are more Brignificant for acquis much worthful in its place. Attaining has always been a debatable issue andong People and claim that it's only based on the stime period will arque an employee gave to its firm. This essay the length that the idea of having promotion and workt despite time is entirely unnecessary Some potential benefits. People work not only for money but to get a chean position in then filld. In fact, the love they spend in their company polish their work and make them more experienced, and liable to hold promotion. Precedently, they gel med to understand a responsion liteer regarding then work, which master them to become fast and punctual. Mother quality for working extended teuer is to be habitual for team work trafd adjust with others, which beast an organizations profil. These personnel became well planned and familiar willl the goods and bads of their company. These few instances have bolstered the idea that recommendation based completely -The firm. on the tenure an employee served to Despite some numer boons associated with the promition based on line spars, the effective that it is mendating and logical, in completely preposterous. Some new at suitable candictates amers gave more date Itatistics of last two decades for enjoying fintherance. shows the bulk of highly qualified workers in either government or forirate sectors, who has been py gf to little experienced workers in more high skilled and their tasks more than ay senios worker. soudate legal with their endorsement with longer the is ill-formed and and could potentially lead to a far outrageout come worse This essay argued that people who favour the longer duration I for promotion have a flawsed und standin of it and the affects of 101 they Believe. In my opinion, Skill and quality wosk is one
Although, basic studies are more
Brignificant
for
acquis
much
worthful
in its place. Attaining has always been a debatable issue
andong
People
and claim that it's
only
based on the
stime
period will
arque
an employee gave to its firm. This essay the length that the
idea
of having promotion and
workt
despite time is
entirely
unnecessary
Some
potential benefits.
People
work
not
only
for money
but
to
get
a
chean
position in then
filld
. In fact, the
love
they spend in their
company
polish their
work
and
make
them more experienced, and liable to hold promotion.
Precedently
, they gel med to understand a
responsion
liteer
regarding then
work
, which master them to become
fast
and punctual. Mother quality for working extended
teuer
is to be habitual for team
work
trafd
adjust with others, which beast
an organizations
profil
. These personnel became well planned and familiar
willl
the
goods
and
bads
of their
company
. These few instances have bolstered the
idea
that recommendation based completely -The firm.
on
the tenure an employee served to Despite
some
numer
boons associated with the
promition
based on line spars, the effective that it is
mendating
and logical, in completely preposterous.
Some
new at suitable
candictates
amers
gave more date
Itatistics
of last two decades for enjoying
fintherance
.
shows
the bulk of
highly
qualified workers in either
government
or
forirate
sectors, who has been
py
gf
to
little
experienced workers in more high skilled and their tasks more than
ay
senios
worker.
soudate
legal with their endorsement with longer the is ill-formed
and and
could
potentially
lead to a far
outrageout
come
worse This essay argued that
people
who
favour
the longer duration I for promotion have a
flawsed
und
standin
of it and the affects of 101 they Believe. In my opinion,
Skill
and quality
wosk
is
one
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IELTS essay Some people think that only those people who have been working in a company for a longer time should get a promotion.

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