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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. GMr0Q
A polluted habitat is one of the biggest problems facing our human species. Some people think that increasing the price of fuel used in four-wheelers and other means of transit may be the most effective way to combat the growing pollution. I agree with this, but still, I think there are other ways to deal with the rising pollution. To begin with, the increase in fuel prices will certainly have an impact on the management of automobiles and other means of transportation. The purpose of a means of transportation, such as cars, has become common for us, and harmful gases such as carbon dioxide and nitrogen are eroding in this pure habitat, a gift from nature. Increasing the price of oil used in transits will definitely reduce its usage to some extent. Furthermore, it will also benefit the authority exchequers that will apparently benefit the development of the poor people and organizations. In addition, if the ministry cooperates in increasing the handling of other energy sources such as solar and wind efficiency, the issue of a polluted climate can be overcome. The authority should motivate the people to make maximum usage of this kind of power. In addition, the ministry should invest more from its exchequers to build an automobile that runs on natural spirit. As a result, the handling of these modes of transportation will increase automatically. In conclusion, I believe that raising the prices of fuel and oil products, which are used in the operation of wagons, may work to some extent, but in addition, the regime should pay attention to the usage of natural efficiency consequently, our surroundings will be less polluted and human beings will be able to live their life in a better way.
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means of transportation. The purpose of a means of transportation, such as cars, has become common for us, and harmful gases such as carbon dioxide and nitrogen are eroding in this pure habitat, a gift from nature. Increasing the
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price
of oil
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used
in transits will definitely
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people
and organizations.

In addition
, if the ministry cooperates in increasing the handling of
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other
energy sources such as solar and wind efficiency, the issue of a polluted climate can
be overcome
. The authority should motivate the
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people
to
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make
maximum usage of this kind of power.
In addition
, the ministry should invest more from its exchequers to build an automobile that runs on natural spirit.
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, the handling of these modes of transportation will increase
automatically
.

In conclusion
, I believe that raising the
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prices
of fuel and oil products, which are
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used
in the operation of wagons, may work to
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some
extent,
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in addition
, the regime should pay attention to the usage of natural efficiency
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live
their life in a better way.
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IELTS essay Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles.

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