some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree. what is your opinion? give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience. v.1
some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree. what is your opinion? v. 1
With the advent of the Internet, advertisements, originally displayed only on TV, billboards, posters and so on, are becoming increasingly ubiquitous and commonplace for the general public. In my view, this kind of impact could be both crucial and, on a certain level, detrimental.
On the one hand, this phenomenon could denote that although we have already had a diverse range of advertisement, people are still capable of inventing innovative approaches catering for all kinds of requirements of advertising. It is a symbol that demonstrates the creativity rooted in human beings. Apart from that, it also represents that the speed of spreading information is conspicuously escalating. More purposeful is, therefore, the fact that, besides booming of the advertising, it constitutes a major reason why people could be so prosperous in this digital age.
On the other hand, there are various unpleasant consequences as well. Firstly, with the omnipresent advertisement, it could potentially cause people to do impulsive shopping. Secondly, the advertisement, if regulated in a mismanaged method, could make people constantly feel uncomfortable or annoyed. In this sense, instead of being an instrumental tool to promote amenities, advertisements could be considered a hindrance when people are frequently blocked by them. Furthermore, it would cost one precious time to have to sift the helpful ad from a host of others.
In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, advertising is a beneficial phenomenon for all with a number of insignificant drawbacks. I believe that in the future we can improve the way advertising is done at present, and embrace the positive influence of advertising even further in the long run.
With the advent of the Internet,
advertisements
,
originally
displayed
only
on TV, billboards, posters and
so
on, are becoming
increasingly
ubiquitous and commonplace for the
general public
. In my view, this kind of impact could be both crucial and, on a certain level, detrimental.
On the one hand, this phenomenon could denote that although we have already had a diverse range of
advertisement
,
people
are
still
capable of inventing innovative approaches catering for all kinds of requirements of advertising. It is a symbol that demonstrates the creativity rooted in human beings. Apart from that, it
also
represents that the speed of spreading information is
conspicuously
escalating. More purposeful is,
therefore
, the fact that,
besides
booming of the advertising, it constitutes a major reason why
people
could be
so
prosperous in this digital age.
On the other hand
, there are various unpleasant consequences
as well
.
Firstly
, with the omnipresent
advertisement
, it could
potentially
cause
people
to do impulsive shopping.
Secondly
, the
advertisement
, if regulated in a mismanaged method, could
make
people
constantly
feel uncomfortable or annoyed. In this sense,
instead
of being an instrumental tool to promote amenities,
advertisements
could
be considered
a hindrance when
people
are
frequently
blocked by them.
Furthermore
, it would cost one precious time to
have to
sift the helpful ad from a host of others.
In conclusion
, as far as I
am concerned
, advertising is a beneficial phenomenon for all with a number of insignificant drawbacks. I believe that in the future we can
improve
the way advertising
is done
at present, and embrace the
positive
influence of advertising even
further
in the long run.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes