Presents are nothing but a token of love which can be in any sources like toys, clothes, and money. Some of them believe that money is the better gift for a youngster but other sets of people and including my opinion do not agree with the above statement.
To begin with, people prefer giving cash, because at times they might not like a materialist thing which is brought for them, due to differences in likes. For example, young people have their know choices and they want to follow modern trends and at the same time, adults are not aware of such a thing. This can get into conflicts in likes and dislikes. That’s the reason money is the best gift to offer.
On the other hand, there are disadvantages to this kind of present because adolescents are not mature enough to make their own decisions and will not value money if its easily available to them on demand has a gift. This can land into misuse of money. For instance, due to peer pressure, many make mistakes like taking drugs, smoking and buy expensive stuff which is not needed like a phone to just show their value, that’s how they are misused. According to my firm belief, there are other ways to offer the gift, if possible proper consultation before buying gifts for youngsters would be a great deal than giving money.
To conclude, offering money has a gift it is not is only a good way, teenagers can be spoiled and In my opinion, also there are other ways to offering presents than this.
Presents are nothing
but
a token of
love
which can be in any sources
like
toys, clothes, and
money
.
Some
of them believe that
money
is the better
gift
for a youngster
but
other
sets of
people
and including my opinion do not
agree
with the above statement.
To
begin
with,
people
prefer giving cash,
because
at times they might not
like
a materialist thing which
is brought
for them, due to differences in
likes
.
For example
, young
people
have their know
choices and
they want to follow modern trends and at the same time, adults are not aware of such a thing. This can
get
into conflicts in
likes
and dislikes. That’s the reason
money
is the best
gift
to offer.
On the
other
hand, there are disadvantages to this kind of present
because
adolescents are not mature
enough
to
make
their
own
decisions and will not value
money
if
its
easily
available to them on demand has a
gift
. This can land into misuse of
money
.
For instance
, due to peer pressure,
many
make
mistakes
like
taking drugs, smoking and
buy
expensive stuff which is not needed
like
a phone to
just
show
their value, that’s how they
are misused
. According to my firm belief, there are
other
ways to offer the
gift
, if possible proper consultation
before
buying
gifts
for youngsters would be a great deal than giving money.
To conclude
, offering
money
has a
gift
it is not is
only
a
good
way,
teenagers
can
be spoiled
and In my opinion,
also
there are
other
ways to offering presents than this.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes