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Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions

Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions dMpX

There exists a general believe that a strong and fit body enhance athletes's flexibility. During the period of practising, most of muscles and bones in the body are improved that will have great a impact on the reflex and the fast. Secondly, an enduring body allows them to perform movements and activities that require power without getting tired. Owning to the fact that when players have healthiness, their lungs, the circulatory system, bone and muscle function properly. The last benefit is that it encourages to avoid injuries. After hard training, competitors are given satisfactory result that their shape are perfect. A balance in both weigh and height is advantage for standing or moving stably in the battle

There exists a general believe that a strong and fit body enhance Did you mean "athlete's" or "athletes'"?athlete'sathletes'
athletes's
 flexibility. During the period of Possible spelling mistake. 'practising' is British English.practicing
practising
, After 'most of', you should use 'the' ("most of the muscles") or simply say "most muscles".most of the musclesmost muscles
most of muscles
 and bones in the body are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
 that will have great Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 impact on the reflex and the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
. Secondly
, an enduring body This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorizes
allows
 them to perform movements and activities that require power without getting tired. Owning to the fact that when players have healthiness, their lungs, the circulatory system, bone and muscle function properly
. The last benefit is that it encourages Did you mean "avoiding"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.avoiding
to avoid
 injuries. After This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 training, competitors are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 satisfactory result that their shape are perfect. A balance in both weigh and height is advantage for standing or moving stably
 in the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphbattle.battle!battle?battle:battle,battle;
battle