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Some people think that learning foreign languages is a waste of time and money

Some people think that learning foreign languages is a waste of time and money p5aR0
I completely disagree with this view because learning another language other than your oother tongue help you gain more oppoturmities to get well paid jobs. Today many international company requirement to eploy someone is that people should have at least ome certificate to express they level of foreign language, especially English. For example, if you do not master this language, you can not contact with your foreign partner. It makes the signing contract become more difficult
I completely disagree with this view
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oppoturmities
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get
well paid jobs.
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someone is that
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certificate to express they level of foreign language,
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, if you do not master this language, you can not contact with your foreign partner. It
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makes
the signing contract become more
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IELTS essay Some people think that learning foreign languages is a waste of time and money

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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