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Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every 5 years. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every 5 years. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this? gjKg
Driving skills have become significantly important in the modern era, as more number of people have started commuting to different places for distinctive purposes. A person is not allowed to drive vehicles unless he attains n age of 18 and have a valid driving license. But, whether it must be mandatory for a person to take their driving exam every 5 years or not. There are both pros and cons for this and it would be discussed in further paragraphs. To commence with the merits, first and foremost is it will enhance their driving skills and they will be more cautious while travelling to different places by their own vehicles. They will take more safety and precautive measures as they have the fear that their license might get suspended. Moreover, they will also follow the traffic rules. Most of the individuals often forget about different signboards and indication of traffic lights after a long time. Therefore, by making the test compulsory, they will be more aware of these. Apart from it, sometimes due to health issues some people are unable to drive in an efficient manner especially older ones, as a consequence, to know the ability of a person to drive it must be obligatory for everyone to reappear for the driving test every 5 years. For an instance, in India, driving license is only provided to those who passes the driving test and hase an age of 18 and above and they need to renew their license after 5 years as it gets expired by then. On the other hand, despite having positive outcomes, there are some negative consequences too. Firstly, it will hinder their work life. By this I mean, most of the people are busy due to their hectic schedule and by retaking the exam again they feel that it is merely a waste of time because getting a driving license is quite a lengthy process. As first they need to clear their written test only then they can appear for their driving test. Secondly, some people will also bribe money to higher authorities in order to get their license as quickly as possible because the do not want to indulge in this tedious activity. As a result, instead of following the right path they commit crime by bribing. To conclude, although a school of thought opines that reappearing for driving exam is useless as it is waste ones' time, in my perspective, however, there are more advantages to this as one can upgrade their driving skills and have more knowledge about different signs and traffic lights.
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have become
significantly
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important
in the modern era, as more number of
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people
have
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started
commuting to
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different
places for distinctive purposes. A person is not
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allowed
to drive vehicles unless he attains n age of 18 and have a valid
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driving
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license
.
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, whether it
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must
be mandatory for a person to take their
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driving
exam every 5 years or not. There are both pros and cons for this and it would
be discussed
in
further
paragraphs.

To commence with the merits,
first
and foremost is it will enhance their
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driving
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skills and
they will be more cautious while travelling to
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different
places by their
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own
vehicles. They will take more safety and
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precautive
measures as they have the fear that their
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license
might
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get
suspended.
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, they will
also
follow the traffic
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rules
. Most of the individuals
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often
forget about
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different
signboards and indication of traffic lights after a long time.
Therefore
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test
compulsory, they will be more aware of these. Apart from it,
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sometimes
due to health issues
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some
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people
are unable to drive
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in an efficient manner
especially
older ones, as a consequence, to know the ability of a person to drive it
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must
be obligatory for everyone to reappear for the
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driving
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test
every 5 years. For an instance, in India,
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driving
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license
is
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only
provided to those who passes the
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driving
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test
and
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hase
an age of 18 and
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above and
they need to renew their
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after 5 years as it
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gets
expired by then.

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, despite having
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positive
outcomes, there are
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some
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consequences too.
Firstly
, it will hinder their work life. By this I mean, most of the
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people
are busy due to their hectic schedule and by retaking the exam again they feel that it is
merely
a waste of time
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because
getting a
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is quite a lengthy process. As
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first they
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then they can appear for their
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.
Secondly
,
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people
will
also
bribe money to higher authorities in order to
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get
their
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license
as
quickly
as possible
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because
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the do
not want to indulge in this tedious activity.
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,
instead
of following the right path they commit crime by bribing.

To conclude
, although a school of
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thought
opines that reappearing for
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exam is useless as it is waste ones' time, in my perspective,
however
, there are more advantages to this as one can upgrade their
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driving
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skills
and have more knowledge about
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different
signs and traffic lights.
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IELTS essay Some people think that it should be compulsory for people to retake their driving test every 5 years. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

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