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Some people think that it is more important to plant tress in open area of towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is more important to plant tress in open area of towns and cities than to build more housing. pYqL
Nowadays, area of county’s are becoming more and more modern due to the fact of industrialization. Few groups believe that it is more significant to plant tress in open zones of rural and urban both side than construct more high-rises and low-rises. I completely agree with statement and this essay is will discuss about facts of this problem in detail. Because of competitive era, people start constructing detached houses, semi-detached houses, skyscraper buildings, whenever they see open spaces without taking care of environment in country side and in cities as well. Studies found that environment is becoming more and more polluted that is harmful to any living creatures such as human, wildlife animals, birds, insects etc. For example, because of, deforestation any wild animals lost their shelters, birds also lost their homes, soil erosion is increasing as number of trees are decreasing. In addition, it is noticed by experts and scientists that, production amount of oxygen is also declining due to plenty of trees are cutting down in order to making progress. Furthermore, in the race of making economical balance of country people are imbalancing the environmental cycles such as Carbon cycle, nitrogen cycle, oxygen cycle which causes damage to our lives. After cutting down trees one can not able to take benefits of trees and forest which is very helpful in economical growth and medical growth also. For instance, trees gives us shelter, ayurvedic medicines which are utilize in control to diabetes, cough and so on, also give us wood which is use by everyone in during life knowingly and unknowingly. Moreover, it also help us to get more rain on the earth but, unfortunately, people also damaging evaporation cycle which provide assist to cloud making procedure. In conclusion, personally, I think that, people ought to take care of environment and atmosphere of the earth, instead of taking part blindly in the race of economical growth.
Nowadays, area of
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county’s
are becoming more and more modern due to the fact of industrialization. Few groups believe that it is more significant to plant tress in open zones of rural and urban both side than construct more high-rises and low-rises. I completely
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agree
with statement and this essay is will
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discuss about facts
of this problem in detail.

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Because
of competitive era,
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people
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start
constructing detached
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houses
, semi-detached
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houses
, skyscraper buildings, whenever they
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see
open spaces without taking care of environment in country side and in cities
as well
. Studies found that environment is becoming more and more polluted
that is
harmful to any living creatures such as human, wildlife animals, birds, insects etc.
For example
,
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because
of, deforestation any wild animals lost their shelters, birds
also
lost their homes, soil erosion is increasing as number of
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trees
are decreasing.
In addition
, it
is noticed
by experts and scientists that, production amount of oxygen is
also
declining due to
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plenty
of
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trees
are cutting down in order to
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making
progress.

Furthermore
, in the race of making economical balance of country
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people
are
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imbalancing
the environmental
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cycles
such as Carbon
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cycle
, nitrogen
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cycle
, oxygen
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cycle
which causes damage to our
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lives
. After cutting down
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trees
one can not able to take benefits of
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trees
and forest which is
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very
helpful in
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economical
growth and medical growth
also
.
For instance
,
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trees
gives us shelter, ayurvedic medicines which are
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utilize
in control to diabetes, cough and
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so
on,
also
give us wood which is
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use
by everyone in during life
knowingly
and
unknowingly
.
Moreover
, it
also
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help
us to
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get
more rain on the earth
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but
, unfortunately,
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people
also
damaging evaporation
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cycle
which provide assist to cloud making procedure.

In conclusion
,
personally
, I
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think
that,
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people
ought to take care of environment and atmosphere of the earth,
instead
of taking part
blindly
in the race of
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economical
growth.
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IELTS essay Some people think that it is more important to plant tress in open area of towns and cities than to build more housing.

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