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Art is considered to be an important part of society.

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Art is said to be an important part of society, also it expresses the culture. Yes, I think teaching art to children plays vital role to shape their future. Art shows the culture and its importance if we continue to teach art to our children either in schools or at home. It makes children competitive if they start learning from school time and explore their hidden skills. As art can be painting, drawing, dancing or singing, it is very essential to understand it and to feel its importance then only person can become a well talented and gain confidence. Childhood is the age to grasp new things and learn quickly. So start teaching art from childhood itself. It gives children new opportunities and explore them to the new world through their hidden talents and skills. Therefore, I think teaching art to the children from their childhood is good idea to show them importance of culture in our society.
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IELTS essay Art is considered to be an important part of society.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
158 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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