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Some people think that it is hard to be a doctor nowadays.

Some people think that it is hard to be a doctor nowadays. 9Yq80
Medicine is most responsible and complicated field. it is a career that requires many years of preparation. Some people think that it is very hard to be a doctor nowadays. I agree with this opinion. I will state my opinion and support it with apropriate atguments and examples. First of all, to be a good doctor it is necessery to learn great everyday. It is difficult because you just sit down at home and learn and learn. Sometimes it is boring. For example when you study in your room and your friends just having fun, you realize that you dont want this and want to be with them. Secondly, before you became a doctor you can't work and have own money. That's annoying. Medicine has many diversions and the studiyng is at least 6 years. So it needs patience. It is also diffucult. In addition, to be a doctor it requires responsibility and patience.
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sit down at home and learn and learn.
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it is boring.
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when you study in your room and your friends
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having fun, you realize that you
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want this and want to be with them.

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you became a
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doctor
you can't work and have
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money. That's annoying. Medicine has
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diversions and the
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is at least 6 years.
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it needs patience. It is
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In addition
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it requires responsibility and patience.
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IELTS essay Some people think that it is hard to be a doctor nowadays.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
154 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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