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Some people think that it is better to learn new languages from an early age.

Some people think that it is better to learn new languages from an early age. KW6b9
Although many people argue that learn a different language is better at an early age, I believe that you can learn anything including languages at any time of your life. Firstly, study a new language is very favourable to maintain the brain active and functional, this can be a good activity to help older people avoid brain diseases like Alzheimer's. Additionally, learning a new language can be pleasurable and satisfactory for leisure time. To conclude I believe that there is no ideal age to learn new idioms.
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argue that learn a
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older
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avoid brain diseases like Alzheimer's.
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can be pleasurable and satisfactory for leisure time.
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IELTS essay Some people think that it is better to learn new languages from an early age.

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