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Perceived and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime

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The last graphic presents the "Perceived and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime: by crime type of 2009/10 and 2010/11". As we can see the perceived likelihood present huge differences with the actual, especially in 2009/10. The subtraction between Perceived 2009/10 and Actual 2009/10 is around 12-17 percentages points, while between perceived 2010/11 and Actual 2010/11 is approximately 9-13 percentages points. In another hand, we can see Car crime is the one with the highest figures both in Perceived and Actual, while Violent crime and Burglary have the same Perceived percentages, nevethelest Burglary has the lowest Actual percentages. Is significant say that even when the Perceived 2009/10 substraction with the Perceived 2010/11 is very different, the Actual 2009/10 and 2010/11 isnt quite differente. In conclusion, in all the crime type value we can observe that the Perceived percentages are nothing compared with the Actual ones, and the most commun crime is the Car crime.
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type of 2009/10 and 2010/11
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2009/10 and
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2010/11 and
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2010/11 is approximately 9-13
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Car
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is the one with the highest figures both in
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, while Violent
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2009/10
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2010/11 is
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type value we can observe that the
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are nothing compared with the
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IELTS essay Perceived and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
156 words
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