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some paper do not believe in paying taxes do you agree or disagree

some paper do not believe in paying taxes 8QPnm

A certain demographic of a society claims that paying taxes is not essential. In this essay, I am partially agree due to uprise of countries income with its benefits along with the its repercussion misuse of collected revenue by officials which will be discussed ahead. To initiate with its constructive occurance, levied taxes are major source of income of the nation. To be more precise it, people have to pay taxes for various services and goods such collected money goes in the account of authority. For instance, the survey of a world bank was conducted in 2019 revealed that approximately 48 percentage share of taxes had been recorded in the annual income of the Germany. As a result, having strong income source any country become economically developed and independent. In addition, officials use Levied revenue not only for their welfare programs in its territory, but also spend in the economic emergency. However, shifting towards its negative results, the deposit money through taxes does not implemented properly of the country's citizens policies. To elucidate, the bureaucratic and politicians utilise to gathered money for fulfillment to their personal requirements. Resultantly, the citizens face many serious constraints such as poverty, food shortage and so on. To epitome, the survey of National sample survey office in 2015, the income which was collected from revenue did not use for safety purposes of countries's residents upto 2014. To recapture, although the gathered money is not used for public safety, yet paying taxes is important to boost of any nation's economy which makes a superpower in the world.

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taxes
 is not essential. In this essay, I am partially
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agree
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 with its benefits along with A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "its repercussion" or "the repercussion"?its repercussionthe repercussion
the its repercussion
 misuse of collected revenue by officials which will be discussed
 ahead.

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income
 of the nation. To be more precise it, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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have to
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taxes
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goods
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taxes
 had been recorded
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income
 of the Germany. As a result
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income
 source any country become economically
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use
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only
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but
also
 spend in the economic emergency.

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negative
 results, the deposit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
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taxes
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implemented
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 of the country's citizens policies. To elucidate, the bureaucratic and politicians Possible spelling mistake. 'utilise' is British English.utilize
utilise
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money
 for fulfillment to their personal requirements. Resultantly
, the citizens face This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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so
 on. To epitome, the survey of National sample survey office in 2015, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 which was collected
 from revenue did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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countries's
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upto
 2014. To recapture, although the gathered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
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used
 for public safety, yet
 paying You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
taxes
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to boost of any nation's economy which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 a superpower in the world. 